Kotik_Kotik

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Kotik_Kotik3d ago
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pearn -->Pearl
So, they did not even seem to notice as the first six months passed by, for the novelty of an elven forest was slow to wear off. However, as those six months turned into a year, both Pearn and River started to feel like they were lost. They'd heard no news about what had been decided regarding the investigation on the Sunborne family, or when they'd be allowed to leave.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotik3d ago
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his foundation -->her foundation
Suffice to say, they hit it off. Their cultivation levels and talents were similar as well, causing them to resonate with one another's experiences in a way. Her cultivation level wasn't higher because her family had forced her to cultivate slowly to strengthen his foundation. His wasn't higher because he was broke and didn't even know there were ways to speed up cultivation.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotik11d ago
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decided-->decimated (?)
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotik11d ago
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im going to compromise myself -->im not going to compromise myself
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotik20d ago
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"no teacher" yeah right he only has a former tier 7 ice affinity wife surely there's no way she knows jack about shit
[The affinity is high,] the clinical voice conceded. [Grade 7 ice is rare. But talent without guidance amounts to nothing. He has no teacher, no resources, no backing. He'll plateau quickly.]
Investing in My Crippled Wife: Every Return Makes Me Stronger
Fantasy · Peace_in_Chaos
Kotik_Kotik25d ago
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Levi's -->Lizs'
Levi's body trembled, but she didn't ask any questions - she couldn't afford to attract any attention towards herself. Yet internally, she couldn't believe something bad might happen to Lex.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotika month ago
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once-->one
A Sovereign could influence the universe, and similarly, the Dao could influence the universe too. Another thing that could directly affect the universe was Dragons might! At the same time, while a tenet did not influence the universe itself, it could affect laws, and once could manipulate laws to influence events and outcomes.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotika month ago
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malro-->marlo
Within the Midnight Inn, through the tavern, a number of old and familiar guests were arriving. Malro, Giselle, Alexander, Larry and the others were all returning to the Midnight Inn after a long time. It was only after they returned that the group of them breathed a sigh of relief, though the tension that filled most of them had not disappeared entirely.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotik2 months ago
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may-->might
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The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Kotik_Kotik2 months ago
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gardened-->gardener
There, he saw the Gardened, sitting crosslegged underneath the Bodhi tree, his body completely jacked, and radiating an exceptionally pure aura. In fact, there were eight pairs of illusory angel wings behind him, and if they solidified, the Gardener would go from being a human to an Arch-Angel. Now that should be fun.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher