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Kotik_Kotik

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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik23h
    Commented

    they-->we

    "We are not afraid of such things, as they are not truly alive ourselves. Also, Minas Mar has a deal with the inhabitants of that land, so there is no need to worry," the Golem Knight explained elaborately. Although his speech was slightly hacked off, there was no hindrance to understanding it.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik6d
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    now-->not

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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik9d
    Commented

    had-->hard

    But for now, he had more important work. With Dig's soul refined, he could start forging it into a mirror image of his Lucky Trinket. That was not had, since it was a simple ring with only a small stone set at the top. What he had to mentally prepare for was the enchanting.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik9d
    Commented

    by-->by hand

    Unfortunately, he also couldn't use the method of suppressing the original ego with the automaton core circuit. From experience he knew, that he would need the space for the Blessing of Hades. This only left doing it by and or Soul Refinery goes -brrrrr
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik11d
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    The hairy beast was called a Troll, which confused Seth a little, but he accepted that it was probably Urth's version of one. The soul's description called it a crude and violent beast, fitting most trolls he knew. The troll's geass was a 90% immunity to physical damage, but in exchange, it would turn into brittle stone under the direct sunlight.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik13d
    Commented

    go-->goo

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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik21d
    Commented
    It is time
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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik27d
    Commented

    bro didn't notice the praying mantis nor the oriole

    "You still don't get it. It's Householder's Rights," the bard whispered into his ear, before tightening his grip. When the cicada fell silent, he threw the unconscious cultivator covered in severe burns, into the middle of the room, for all the defiant watchers to see.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik28d
    Posted

    if you've read any of the dozens of transmigrator/regression stories you'll feel right at home, mc is the trash of a powerful family that is poisoning him, if he doesn't change the future he'll have a miserable end etc etc. Everyone behaves like it's a copy paste cultivation novel, in chapter 8 we even get the famous lets see who's better amongst us bet with a cartoonishly overdrawn young master with the punishment being barking like a dog in front of the whole assembly... personally i dont find the continuous repetition of these storyblocks entertaining and the rather glacial and infodumpy pacing doesn't charm me either. The book is very honest about what it is so you'll quickly know if it's something you'll enjoy but i for one won't be induligingany further.

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    I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!
    Fantasy · DurcalAka
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    a group -->by a group

    He was not the only one who had his eyes on the funny group of friends, openly showing the prosperity of Minas Mar. As he was watching, there was a young man approaching the group. He was handsome, clad in expensive, high-quality robes, and surrounded a group of sycophants.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    piece-->peace

    The mortals of the land were not prepared for monsters, invaders, or divine beasts suddenly appearing outside of dangerous regions. The piece of the mainland that had been kept for millennia was broken as otherworldly beasts traveled through the land, marauding and looting.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    hat-->had

    Was this a peculiarity of their world? Seth had heard about it in Ora, oftentimes worlds hat their own system of magic or style of mana usage. The materials at the tower of Willis were a good example.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    me-->myself

    "Yeah, I keep telling me that, too," he said with a wry smile.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    Like like -->look like

    "But that wasn't all, right? You don't like like it was just that," Sivri inquired perceptively. Seeing that she would let go of it, the blacksmith simply told her everything he found and suspected.
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    Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Arkusar
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    his disfigured -->her disfigured

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    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
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    ao-->of

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    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
    Commented

    sou-->soul

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    The Innkeeper
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
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    has-->had

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    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
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    easily in kolar-->easily accessible in kolar

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    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
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  • Kotik_Kotik
    Kotik_Kotik1mth
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    swords-->words

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    The Eldrim Cards Legacy
    Fantasy · lifesketcher
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