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Stefans1977
Stefans1977Lv155mth
2024-10-07 11:19

After reading 76 chapters, i feel like it’s a good point to leave a review. From the premise, story building, character development, grammar and world building. I can say that it‘s one of the better ones i‘ve read on this platform. There‘s virtually no filler or info dumping, the story is going on an optimal pace and the mc is likeable. The dynamics between mc and side characters are fleshed out and make for a more vivid picture. Although i was doubtful about guns in a magical world, the way it was implemented just works and make the story and setting believable. All in all, it’s a novel i can highly recommend and hope the quality will prevail in the coming chapters.

A Gunslinger’s System in a World of Magic

Nate_Quinn
4.3
274 Chs

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Nate_Quinn
Nate_QuinnAuthor

Thanks for the Review I’m glad you like the read :)

5mth
Lestda
LestdaLv15

I don't know what are you reading for sure... one of the best in this web? what are you? a bot?

4mth
Stefans1977
Stefans1977Lv15

I was wondering what kind of person would call me a bot and look at that, it was a professional troll. You know, one can read everything that others comment or review in this app, and you are one bitter person. Every other comment is „drop this, drop that“, it’s really sad. Maybe reading just isn’t for you. I‘d recommend you switch to instagram and critique people their for their looks, instead. This way, you won’t strain your brain too much.

Lestda:I don't know what are you reading for sure... one of the best in this web? what are you? a bot?
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Ryuksflower
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Im new in this app but reading the reviews I believe this will be worth it 😌

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ss_r3x
ss_r3xLv14

I personally feel this story has enough potential too be better than cosmic emperor & I haven’t seen any gunslinger novels & even better this mc is an criminal that just makes me love it even more, I hope you keep going!!

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Lestda
LestdaLv15

Overall just a fanfiction of rdr2 with magic, the development is junk in the purest way. The fact that the guns are plain useless is totally a call for drop for a novel with a Gunslinger as MC, the Mc is another issue, he's been carry for the others chars and can't see the previous live personality. The lack of ingenuity to much the genres are the big issue about this novel, hit that take 7 dmg in the shoulder or hits that put the mc in 1of35 hp just ruins the constance and logic of a plot, is more than obvious that the author is an amateur that don't put the points where has to be. Disappointing at least.

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Kekekekekekek
KekekekekekekLv15

I haven’t read a single word of the story but the synopsis alone has

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GerryCdL
GerryCdLLv14

Just because I love cosmic emperor. Nice to see you aren't done writing author sama

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Spencer_Boudrey
Spencer_BoudreyLv15

I’m really enjoying this story please keep this one going!! Also, more frequent updates would be great, this story has only just begun it seems but it’s great so far!

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Monokuma
MonokumaLv14

This is literally my first review of any novel since joining this app. Honestly, I've been looking for a gunslinger-type novel for the longest, and this novel here hits everything good I would desire from it. The pacing and flow of the story are great.. the characters are properly fleshed out to the point that they stick enough in my memory. The actual writing is great, and I don't feel like I'm losing brain cells with each and every chapter. Thank you so much for the good read so far and keep up the stellar work.

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Sakkaku_no_mori
Sakkaku_no_moriLv14

Reveal spoiler

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BigRig
BigRigLv15

You know I read the synopsis and title, then I was instantly hooked and knew this book was gonna be good!!

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WillTheThrill
WillTheThrillLv15

Really enjoying so far. The potential is high for this novel. Curious to see how this will play out for the MC. Interesting parallel world with Wild West views with magic. Recommend giving this novel a shot as the author has made solid work before. The only thing I want more of it is more world building and MC character development but this will take time to develop. Otherwise, worth the read so far.

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