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R0BLv25mth
2024-09-20 04:52

Writing quality 4/5 (normal) Updating stability 4/5 (normal) Story development 2/5 (you could say this is neither a novel, nor a fanfic. Instead it's a shitty combination of the two) Character design 2/5 (I don't like the way author tries to communicate his views through mc monologue. Focus on the story and what matters and not your views on harem, jeez) World background 1/5 (the world doesn't exist - author made up the world. In other words anything he says goes)

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Jaxon235
Jaxon235Lv2

You should reread it, it's actually great

R0B
R0BLv2

Can't bother

Jaxon235:You should reread it, it's actually great
Bter
BterLv14

haven't read it yet but this is the first time i've seen someone be mad because an author wrote about their own world instead of plagiarizing one LOL

R0B
R0BLv2

Bter:haven't read it yet but this is the first time i've seen someone be mad because an author wrote about their own world instead of plagiarizing one LOL
steel17
steel17Lv4

i agree, the world building is nonexistent and the magic of his world is glossed over when he is literally in a school it would be so easy to explain it

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