The overall story is good, the battle description is also good, but there is one thing that I still don't know, the world, I still don't understand the chapter about the assassin when Sukuna was shot.If I'm not mistaken, the bullet stopped for a moment before passing beside him, similar to the limitless technique, and I don't know the history of the world either because he reincarnated into Sukuna's body. Suddenly you are at risk of fighting an emotional B-rank monster because a friend you just met dies even though you just met and you don't know each other well, plus it's a burden.But the most important thing is that I still don't know the background of the world and I'm still confused, like a Chinese novel, it lets in unimportant characters and gives them cheat powers.That's all I want to tell you, there's still a lot I want to type but I'm too lazy. But everything is good, your novel author's enthusiasm is good and interesting.
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In the assassin chapter, the trajectory of the bullet changed slightly because of cursed energy-mana interference, which is what I was trying to show. But I guess it didn't come out as clearly as I wanted it to, I'll tweak these minor bits whenever I get time. As for the characters, I have stuff planned for a lot of them. And for the emotional thing, I believe you misunderstood slightly(or perhaps it was, again, because of unclear writing), but Sukuna was confused himself of why he was emotional, which I TRIED to do for character development in the future, and also to show that he too can create bonds, but it might have turned out to be too... quick. In any case, Thanks a lot for the review :3
Oh I see, thanks bro for your answer, keep up the spirit bro👍
