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Nerdyfreak
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2024-12-22 00:37

Kinda mid ngl only recently the chapter are getting good . Would only recommend u to read it if u have patience for the story to get better. Yeah one more thing is that world development/building is a thing that is lacking in this novel and the author should really try to focus on it as it will greatly boost the quality of this novel.I hope I have given a genuine review and the author will consider and try to improve the faults I tried to point out. I might come out as a bit strict on giving the review of 3.4 but I will change the review accordingly as the story progresses and the author continues to fix it's faults as it has a lot of potential and I will be looking forward to it. Peace.

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ImaMelonFarm
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I understand what you mean. While re-reading the earlier chapters, it's clear where I went wrong. As for world-building, I'm still learning how to do that xD. I've learnt a lot as I progressed in chapters, though. In any case, I'll probably rewrite those chapters when I get time. Thanks a lot for your review, and I hope you continue enjoying the story :3

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