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Bro, you didn't put your Monkey King novel on hiatus, right? It's a shame that the novel you rewrote ended up being a useless background novel, so please continue your Monkey King novel.

Bro, actually your writing is good but can you please tell me what is the name of your protagonist and insert the age of your protagonist in each chapter or after the time skip and also add POV So that everyone who reads your novel won't be too confused, but from my point of view, it's already good, it just needs a little improvement.

Bro this is the second time can you tell us or me how old is MC and MC name

You know bro from chapter one to the current chapter there is not a single introduction of the MC like his name, they just call him that kid this kid, that master this master

Bully maguire

Excuse me, who is Alien Noir?

Seriously, you made a useless chapter just to give useless information.

They're so over the top but you know what, I like this

A very anti-mainstream opener