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asaade9999
asaade9999Lv33mth
2024-07-25 10:14

just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc just a canon rehash with a different name of the mc

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OmegaLul1234
OmegaLul1234Author

Read to chapter 11

asaade9999
asaade9999Lv3

nahhh its a canon rehash,paul is just a minor side character he doesn't add much to the plot, everything is just the same the timeline the plot the characters, its just an edited canon rehash

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Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

Is it trye?

OmegaLul1234:Read to chapter 11
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

Nah im past that chapter and the only change theres been is how leon is taking all the roles of rudeus thats it really, nothing else as of yet.

OmegaLul1234:Read to chapter 11
Salazarson
SalazarsonLv1

I was going to read it but I decided not to. Thank you to save time.

Kaiser_6117:Nah im past that chapter and the only change theres been is how leon is taking all the roles of rudeus thats it really, nothing else as of yet.
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

I think you should still give it a shot, while it barely has changes in the first 15 chapters it does go on a different route from there but not by much

Salazarson: I was going to read it but I decided not to. Thank you to save time.
Salazarson
SalazarsonLv1

Can you please explain a little more? Is it his own story or does he live as Rudeus' assistant? For example, does Rudeus accompany him to Roa for training or does he make his way to a different place or earlier for his own reason? And don't hesitate to give spoilers, it's better for me to read.

Kaiser_6117:I think you should still give it a shot, while it barely has changes in the first 15 chapters it does go on a different route from there but not by much
Kaiser_6117
Kaiser_6117Lv14

Lets just say a lot has changed while it didn’t as well, a little spoiler rudeus was teleported to the great forest all by himself while leon was teleported to the demon continent with the addition of his two sisters..

Salazarson:Can you please explain a little more? Is it his own story or does he live as Rudeus' assistant? For example, does Rudeus accompany him to Roa for training or does he make his way to a different place or earlier for his own reason? And don't hesitate to give spoilers, it's better for me to read.
Salazarson
SalazarsonLv1

I am writing for the friends who will read these comments, I am on the 25th chapter (I read it in 3 days, approximately 15 hours in total), Leon is a very sweet and strong main character. In terms of following the story, only the titles are followed, the rest is the author's own writings. For example, "Eris was given a lesson by going to Roa," only this sentence makes the story follow, the development of the events, the character interactions, the development of the characters change a lot and I loved it so much. Leon is a polite, gentle, handsome, talented character who has the aura of a hero, and because he makes you live all of these with his own humor and tone, you read it with a smile on your face instead of getting angry.

Kaiser_6117:Lets just say a lot has changed while it didn’t as well, a little spoiler rudeus was teleported to the great forest all by himself while leon was teleported to the demon continent with the addition of his two sisters..
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