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GawdLv159mth
2024-07-26 04:23

OK sofar I have seen neither hide nor hair of any system. even tho it says system in the title. Just because an old man tells you to do something then gives rewards doesn't make him a system. Secondly people trying to reinvent the system genre annoy me. the system genre works because it is a nice "turn off your brain experience" also the MCs personality is soo out there and off the wall even jarjar would be annoyed. it also makes the story harder to follow and is not nearly as funny as author thinks it is.

In Marvel with a Star Wars System

VynDahl
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VynDahl
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Let me begin by saying thanks for ranking it so high, and contributing power stones despite the issues with the story. I appreciate it! Second, I can appreciate that you like system stories as is because they are predictable. I also like system stories, but I've enjoyed a few stories where the author tried to make them more grounded. I like those as well. Third, you'll find he gets a system and it isn't the old man...although he has an interesting name. Finally, I need to address the level of funny in this book. I disagree completely with you on this point. The book is exactly how funny I think it is because I'm the one who established that level of funny in my mind. It may not be as funny as you think it is because that is according to the standard of funny that exists within you. To judge the fairness of the level of funny we would need some objective standard of funny by which to judge it. Absent such an objective standard we must admit that how funny the story is depends on each person's assessment of funny according to their tastes. Therefore, I win. It is exactly how funny I think it is.[img=recommend] I hope you'll enjoy the story more as it develops, thanks for reading!

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Guys! Look at the Thor on the cover! Look at their faces! Look at MC's hairline! This is awesome! Dunno about the story though, It's too soon to tell but I'll change my review after a few more chapters to something more accurate.

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Woshi
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Honestly you need a better synopsis. It's hard to keep track of what's going on when there's no general idea of what the story actually is. Here's a gist for new readers. These two friends go out of a theater and are lured to play this VR game but in actuality they get transported to a star wars/marvel verse? Lots of star wars references/jokes. Not my cup of tea, especially the dual protagonists. Good luck!.

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Reveal spoiler

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Magu
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Zeroz7
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La historia no esta nada mal, aunque en mi opinion es mas adecuada para los que sean fanaticos de star wars, de otra forma resulta algo incomodo, por mi parte, dejo la historia, pero no esta nada mal para los que les gusta este tipo de historias

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WintyLP
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nice

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_Asura2414_
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So far from what I’ve read you will see some errors with characters names being used when their not supposed to in the first 20 chapters maybe, some might be very annoyed with some grammar here and there However the author is quick to fix these things so do help him out when you spot them as to allow more readers to not be confused as the story progresses. Now I have yet to see Mc and other character pictures other than this fanfic cover so I’ll leave that alone, authors updates daily which is great though I would prefer longer chapters than short. I’ve seen quite a few people complain that they’re 2 MCs which is not true though it does seem that way, author has already addressed that in one of the reviews here and in comments. Other then this that’s all the issues I currently recall that me and other readers had issues with that I’ve seen.

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