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2024-07-26 22:40

So far from what I’ve read you will see some errors with characters names being used when their not supposed to in the first 20 chapters maybe, some might be very annoyed with some grammar here and there However the author is quick to fix these things so do help him out when you spot them as to allow more readers to not be confused as the story progresses. Now I have yet to see Mc and other character pictures other than this fanfic cover so I’ll leave that alone, authors updates daily which is great though I would prefer longer chapters than short. I’ve seen quite a few people complain that they’re 2 MCs which is not true though it does seem that way, author has already addressed that in one of the reviews here and in comments. Other then this that’s all the issues I currently recall that me and other readers had issues with that I’ve seen.

In Marvel with a Star Wars System

VynDahl
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VynDahl
VynDahlAuthor

Thanks for the great review! The best way to help fanfics like this is to get the help of those who are enjoying it. Editing things you write makes it hard to see the mistakes sometimes. Thanks for the community support as always!

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Hamtaro_
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Guys! Look at the Thor on the cover! Look at their faces! Look at MC's hairline! This is awesome! Dunno about the story though, It's too soon to tell but I'll change my review after a few more chapters to something more accurate.

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Woshi
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Honestly you need a better synopsis. It's hard to keep track of what's going on when there's no general idea of what the story actually is. Here's a gist for new readers. These two friends go out of a theater and are lured to play this VR game but in actuality they get transported to a star wars/marvel verse? Lots of star wars references/jokes. Not my cup of tea, especially the dual protagonists. Good luck!.

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Daoist_Empereur
Daoist_EmpereurLv15

Reveal spoiler

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Magu
MaguLv12

Reveal spoiler

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Zeroz7
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La historia no esta nada mal, aunque en mi opinion es mas adecuada para los que sean fanaticos de star wars, de otra forma resulta algo incomodo, por mi parte, dejo la historia, pero no esta nada mal para los que les gusta este tipo de historias

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WintyLP
WintyLPLv1

nice

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Gawd
GawdLv15

OK sofar I have seen neither hide nor hair of any system. even tho it says system in the title. Just because an old man tells you to do something then gives rewards doesn't make him a system. Secondly people trying to reinvent the system genre annoy me. the system genre works because it is a nice "turn off your brain experience" also the MCs personality is soo out there and off the wall even jarjar would be annoyed. it also makes the story harder to follow and is not nearly as funny as author thinks it is.

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