Gawd

don't let the door hitcha where the lord split ya.

OK my issue here is being unable to get into the story due to all the problems I see with the plot based from cannon. yes you can say AU, but when you change the source material past a point it becomes better to just write an original fiction. I was unable to get past chapter 2 due to all the unexplained changes. the biggest being Godric Griffindor riding the hogwarts express (basically) to a different magical school. firstly is that the magical community of Harry potter being unable to create even a mill 1k years into the future due to ease of magical solutions for all problems. Secondly the hogwarts express itself was Stolen not created by magicals. Third, the founders were the FIRST to make a magical school. it is the entire reason they were so celebrated, the magical school changed the way wizards lived world-wide. Hogwarts made the magical community into a community. without being the first to make a magical school I doubt that even students of hogwarts would care much about them, and most likely would have just thought the marauders book a stuffy biography. also from the HP books it seems the founders lives were well known; or at least an overview. also the sword of Griffindor which it seems in this work he already has, was commissioned from the goblins by godric himself. in short my only problem with this story and why I am not going to continue reading is because of the amount of plot changes and the speed they keep coming. Best way to do a FF IMO is keeping as much of the major history of the world the same while making minor tweaks.

I thought Vali was a member of Khaos Brigade?

this must be a total AU because riser was a self promoting grapist who loved Noone besides himself. he didn't even care about his sister.

how is telling her he is going to force himself on all her friends and make her watch while he grapes them not evil? at least that is what he does in the anime. not saying the mc needs to get involved but please don't act like Riser isn't evil.

because kurama is the strongest, I believe it is even said at one point by 8 tails that even if all the other bijuu teamed up they could only equal kurama and not defeat him.

the certain area is the butt isn't it?