Honestly you need a better synopsis. It's hard to keep track of what's going on when there's no general idea of what the story actually is. Here's a gist for new readers. These two friends go out of a theater and are lured to play this VR game but in actuality they get transported to a star wars/marvel verse? Lots of star wars references/jokes. Not my cup of tea, especially the dual protagonists. Good luck!.
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I wrote a new synopsis, but just so you know this story doesn't have two MCs. It has one MC and one primary supporting character. I know that ninety percent of Webnovels have a character whose point of view is the only one. However, most decent stories have other characters with developed backgrounds. To say that there are two MCs you might as well say there are three MCs since Natalie gets a lot of focus. Thanks for reading!
Thanks for the clarification. The old synopsis made it seem like there was one protagonist and then in the story all of a sudden his friend goes with him. Initial vibes gave off this confusion. I do think the new synopsis is a lot better 👍
VynDahl:I wrote a new synopsis, but just so you know this story doesn't have two MCs. It has one MC and one primary supporting character. I know that ninety percent of Webnovels have a character whose point of view is the only one. However, most decent stories have other characters with developed backgrounds. To say that there are two MCs you might as well say there are three MCs since Natalie gets a lot of focus. Thanks for reading!image
I'm glad to hear it! Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you think. It was good to hear that I was confusing people. I appreciate the people who spend the time to let me know what's going on. I hope you'll enjoy the story as it continues forward.
yeah, dual protagonist is one of the worst troupe out there
