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Z_is_for_Zapdos
Z_is_for_ZapdosLv12mth
2024-11-03 05:34

Enjoying the novel so far but my only concern is that the MC is going to be way to powerful compared to his peers. For example, He has just joined the academy and is already talking about leaving because he is to strong. Hopefully this changes slightly because I want to see him grow during his time in the academy, not coast monotonously during the arc.

My Elf System

PhoenixAsh
4.3
228 Chs

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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0Lv12

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

6mth

Wrathdg
WrathdgLv4

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

5mth
Valyrxa
ValyrxaLv15

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

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SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

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Aayann_
Aayann_Lv14

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

6mth
Jordzfml_7
Jordzfml_7Lv4

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

5mth
ULTIMATE_BEING
ULTIMATE_BEINGLv3

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

2mth
Noguenko
NoguenkoLv3

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

2mth
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

1mth
PizzaDeliveryGuy
PizzaDeliveryGuyLv13

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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