Item: My Elf System
Rating: 5
Author: Lucky0_0

Lucky0_0Lv126mth

2024-07-18 02:18

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

My Elf System

PhoenixAsh

4.3

228 Chs

Liked by 39 people

Replies34

PhoenixAshAuthor

6mth

Lucky0_0Lv12

thanks for replying[img=recommend]

PhoenixAsh:
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Mister_SPOLv4

Is it too late to not make it a garbage harem ? I Always wanted to read a story with an elf mc

PhoenixAsh:
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6mth

absolueLv13

The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

Mister_SPO:Is it too late to not make it a garbage harem ? I Always wanted to read a story with an elf mc

5mth

Nadare17Lv4

😂😂

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

5mth

Life_sa_Beach_Lv11

Get out eunuch

Mister_SPO:Is it too late to not make it a garbage harem ? I Always wanted to read a story with an elf mc

5mth

Balkaran_UchihaLv3

G called him eunuch😂

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

5mth

DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Where can read this without lockes on chapters?

5mth

I_Choose_ViolenceLv4

He's your father 👨 though

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

4mth

mollyqlLv1

eat shit loser

I_Choose_Violence:He's your father 👨 though

4mth

I_Choose_ViolenceLv4

I'll leave that to your dad

mollyql:eat shit loser

4mth

FeebasLv3

you can read it using free pass.😓

DaoistjQtMkq:Where can read this without lockes on chapters?

4mth

DaoistjQtMkqLv3

That will take so much time to unlock chapters

Feebas:you can read it using free pass.😓

4mth

FeebasLv3

that's how webnovel work. sad 😢

DaoistjQtMkq:That will take so much time to unlock chapters

4mth

DaoistjQtMkqLv3

Is there no other way?

Feebas:that's how webnovel work. sad 😢

4mth

Minty_SquidLv14

$$$

DaoistjQtMkq:Is there no other way?

4mth

raizell24Lv4

bro😂😂

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

4mth

DaoistrmX7w9Lv3

@Author can you describe character's appearance in a more detailed manner.

4mth

Azrael_DAngelLv14

🤣🤣

absolue:The only trash here is y, get out of here eunuchs

4mth

Shaun_Wiffen_3076Lv15

Good book and enjoyable character that give a smile

3mth

Other Reviews

WrathdgLv4

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

5mth

ValyrxaLv15

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

6mth

SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

6mth

Aayann_Lv14

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

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Jordzfml_7Lv4

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

5mth

ULTIMATE_BEINGLv3

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

2mth

NoguenkoLv3

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

2mth

Santy_MelayLv1

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

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PizzaDeliveryGuyLv13

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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