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Aayann_
Aayann_Lv149mth
2024-07-15 10:18

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

My Elf System

PhoenixAsh
4.3
228 Chs

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Daoistur1031
Daoistur1031Lv4

It's there netorare or yuri this novel I hope not??

9mth
PhoenixAsh
PhoenixAshAuthor

Daoistur1031:It's there netorare or yuri this novel I hope not??
9mth
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MochiFeelings
MochiFeelingsLv14

how much lemon we talking about here? Perfect balance or too much?

9mth
Keith_Samayo
Keith_SamayoLv15

hey, is there action and fighting in this? the description and a tag says slice of life, can't really read if it's just about day to day life with no progression and fighting/ action in it

8mth
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Troxking
TroxkingLv15

Are Mc’s mom and aunt in his harem?

PhoenixAsh:
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8mth
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PhoenixAsh
PhoenixAshAuthor

Yes, there is.

Keith_Samayo:hey, is there action and fighting in this? the description and a tag says slice of life, can't really read if it's just about day to day life with no progression and fighting/ action in it
8mth
PhoenixAsh
PhoenixAshAuthor

Troxking:Are Mc’s mom and aunt in his harem?
8mth
1
Troxking
TroxkingLv15

PhoenixAsh:
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8mth
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Scroll_Eater
Scroll_EaterLv14

Upload pace says 8/week but it looks like it’s slowed down a lot. Can you let us know what’s going on please?

8mth
Scroll_Eater
Scroll_EaterLv14

Can you please respond to the question aAuthor? Also, why has every chapter recently gone to privledge? When will regular chapters resume?

Scroll_Eater:Upload pace says 8/week but it looks like it’s slowed down a lot. Can you let us know what’s going on please?
8mth
1
PhoenixAsh
PhoenixAshAuthor

Sorry, I didn't even see this until now. All privileged chapters have been filled since three days ago,so you should be able to read more free chapters now

Scroll_Eater:Can you please respond to the question aAuthor? Also, why has every chapter recently gone to privledge? When will regular chapters resume?
8mth
1
Scroll_Eater
Scroll_EaterLv14

Yay! Thank you for the update!

PhoenixAsh:Sorry, I didn't even see this until now. All privileged chapters have been filled since three days ago,so you should be able to read more free chapters now
8mth
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

I really wanted to give this novel a go. Ty for confirming my suspicions. Good luck on your writing endeavors ✌🏾

PhoenixAsh:
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8mth
GegeSadewa
GegeSadewaLv15

So..... MC are actually not related by blood with his Mom and Aunt or it is....?

PhoenixAsh:
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Lucky0_0
Lucky0_0Lv13

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

9mth

Valyrxa
ValyrxaLv15

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

9mth
Wrathdg
WrathdgLv4

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

8mth
SWORDGOD_ETERNITY
SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

9mth
Noguenko
NoguenkoLv3

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

5mth
Jordzfml
JordzfmlLv4

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

8mth
Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

4mth
ULTIMATE_BEING
ULTIMATE_BEINGLv3

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

5mth
Magick
MagickLv13

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

4mth
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