Item: My Elf System
Rating: 5
Author: Aayann_

Aayann_Lv146mth

2024-07-15 10:18

Till now it is pretty good novel to read for me , the background and characters are also good, i really recommend this novel to people.

My Elf System

PhoenixAsh

4.3

228 Chs

Liked by 14 people

Replies14

Daoistur1031Lv4

It's there netorare or yuri this novel I hope not??

6mth

PhoenixAshAuthor

Daoistur1031:It's there netorare or yuri this novel I hope not??

6mth

MochiFeelingsLv14

how much lemon we talking about here? Perfect balance or too much?

6mth

Keith_SamayoLv15

hey, is there action and fighting in this? the description and a tag says slice of life, can't really read if it's just about day to day life with no progression and fighting/ action in it

6mth

TroxkingLv15

Are Mc’s mom and aunt in his harem?

PhoenixAsh:
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PhoenixAshAuthor

Yes, there is.

Keith_Samayo:hey, is there action and fighting in this? the description and a tag says slice of life, can't really read if it's just about day to day life with no progression and fighting/ action in it

6mth

PhoenixAshAuthor

Troxking:Are Mc’s mom and aunt in his harem?

5mth

TroxkingLv15

PhoenixAsh:
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Scroll_EaterLv14

Upload pace says 8/week but it looks like it’s slowed down a lot. Can you let us know what’s going on please?

5mth

Scroll_EaterLv14

Can you please respond to the question aAuthor? Also, why has every chapter recently gone to privledge? When will regular chapters resume?

Scroll_Eater:Upload pace says 8/week but it looks like it’s slowed down a lot. Can you let us know what’s going on please?

5mth

PhoenixAshAuthor

Sorry, I didn't even see this until now. All privileged chapters have been filled since three days ago,so you should be able to read more free chapters now

Scroll_Eater:Can you please respond to the question aAuthor? Also, why has every chapter recently gone to privledge? When will regular chapters resume?

5mth

Scroll_EaterLv14

Yay! Thank you for the update!

PhoenixAsh:Sorry, I didn't even see this until now. All privileged chapters have been filled since three days ago,so you should be able to read more free chapters now

5mth

TwistedTsunamiLv15

I really wanted to give this novel a go. Ty for confirming my suspicions. Good luck on your writing endeavors ✌🏾

PhoenixAsh:
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GegeSadewaLv15

So..... MC are actually not related by blood with his Mom and Aunt or it is....?

PhoenixAsh:
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Other Reviews

Lucky0_0Lv12

ntr? yuri? I hope not. . .. ... ... .

6mth

WrathdgLv4

I know There will be a harem But i want an idea of how big it is also please don't include the mom and aunt

5mth

ValyrxaLv15

Its really great, I would advice everyone to give this novel a try! @Author: If you drop this… Im gonna cry 🥲

6mth

SWORDGOD_ETERNITYLv4

oh finally an elf Mc with harem amazing 👏💙🙌😍

6mth

Jordzfml_7Lv4

great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍

5mth

ULTIMATE_BEINGLv3

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

2mth

NoguenkoLv3

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

2mth

Santy_MelayLv1

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

1mth

PizzaDeliveryGuyLv13

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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