Item: My Elf System
Rating: 4.6
Author: RagingMutant

RagingMutantLv154mth

2024-09-02 00:08

Story is really good, so good that I bought the most expensive privilege tier both last month and at the beginning of this month. There have been 4 chapters put out since I bought privilege again. Unfortunately I can’t access any of them and only have access up to chapter 83/97. I don’t know why this is. Idk if the author is trying to stockpile more chapters for the next privilege tier so every “new” chapter is just going towards the next tier. Whatever it is if I don’t get any chapters this month because of it I probably won’t purchase privilege again. If you like the story I’d hold off on purchasing privilege until such a thing is resolved.

My Elf System

PhoenixAsh

4.3

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Liked by 1 people

Replies4

PhoenixAshAuthor

It has been resolved, so sorry you couldn't read the chapters until now. you should be able to Read them .Once again, I apologized and I hope you continue to have a wonderful reading experience. Oh, and for paying for the highest privilege tier, I......

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RagingMutantLv15

Thanks. I can delete this review and rewrite one if you would like. I don’t think there is a way to edit it unfortunately.

PhoenixAsh:It has been resolved, so sorry you couldn't read the chapters until now. you should be able to Read them .Once again, I apologized and I hope you continue to have a wonderful reading experience. Oh, and for paying for the highest privilege tier, I......
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4mth

PhoenixAshAuthor

Nah, it's fine. it isn't really a negative review imo but you're free to do as you think is best . Once again,.......

RagingMutant:Thanks. I can delete this review and rewrite one if you would like. I don’t think there is a way to edit it unfortunately.

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Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO

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