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Aboode
AboodeLv19mth
2024-07-04 01:28

First of all the title is misleading he is a Superman wannabe basically he tries to act like Superman there is no different (ps. what is the point? I mean you could read the DC comics it is basically the same good alignment) he expose himself before fully developing himself heck he didn’t even control his power this story would’ve been far more interesting if the MC is a gray character or an anti hero my biggest complain so far is the MC other than that I think it is a good story although some of the plot is forced.

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Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

I don't see how the title is a big deal, you can just look at the tags and see there is no anti-hero or villain tag. And about him exposing himself before being fully developed. I like that. That's what he wanted at first as well, but things don't always go as planned. Did you want to see him ignore the cry for help? You could argue he shouldn't go help in the latest chapter as the main cast will be fine as long as the story follows canon events. He doesn't know what civilians will die if he doesn't go help and sometimes reading about a character that always takes logical actions can be just as annoying to read as an emotional one who doesnt think before doing things. People are emotional, not everything has to be logical or follow the "best course of action." He doesn't want to be a "superman wannabe" as you call it. He simply looks up to him for being a symbol of hope for humanity and wants to emulate that. Furthermore, he said himself that he would kill the very worst of villains which I don't believe superman did. I just think this review is a bit harsh for merely wanting the mc to be another anti-hero or villain. If you want that, read the tags of a story and skip. There's a million of them to find on this platform. I didn't get any sense that the plot being forced either. I just want to reply to your comment, so others can read it and not be deterred to try it like I was. I almost didn't read it thinking it was bad.

Aboode
AboodeLv1

I appreciate your reply, but I stand by my points. The title can mislead readers, and while tags help, sometimes authors don’t include all the appropriate tags, such as a good alignment tag and other time people don’t read the tags. Regarding the MC exposing himself early on, it’s fine if you like that, but I prefer more character development before such reveals. It makes the story richer in my view. For example, when he flies around looking for a place to train and conveniently comes across a crime with someone screaming for help, it felt forced to me. The timing was too perfect and disrupted the flow of the narrative. His interference exposed him to other superheroes and supervillains, which could cause problems, especially since he didn’t fully control his powers yet. The Superman comparison wasn’t meant to bash the MC but to highlight similarities that felt unoriginal to me. Yes, he might kill villains, but the overall vibe still feels like a Superman wannabe. I get that not everyone will see the plot as forced, but for me, it had moments that felt unnatural or too convenient.

Lucius_SS:I don't see how the title is a big deal, you can just look at the tags and see there is no anti-hero or villain tag. And about him exposing himself before being fully developed. I like that. That's what he wanted at first as well, but things don't always go as planned. Did you want to see him ignore the cry for help? You could argue he shouldn't go help in the latest chapter as the main cast will be fine as long as the story follows canon events. He doesn't know what civilians will die if he doesn't go help and sometimes reading about a character that always takes logical actions can be just as annoying to read as an emotional one who doesnt think before doing things. People are emotional, not everything has to be logical or follow the "best course of action." He doesn't want to be a "superman wannabe" as you call it. He simply looks up to him for being a symbol of hope for humanity and wants to emulate that. Furthermore, he said himself that he would kill the very worst of villains which I don't believe superman did. I just think this review is a bit harsh for merely wanting the mc to be another anti-hero or villain. If you want that, read the tags of a story and skip. There's a million of them to find on this platform. I didn't get any sense that the plot being forced either. I just want to reply to your comment, so others can read it and not be deterred to try it like I was. I almost didn't read it thinking it was bad.
Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

He said himself he flew over multiple states and he has super hearing... The chances of him eventually finding someone in trouble is astronomical, especially in the world they are in. I don't understand how that was forced. But you have your right to your own opinion.

Aboode:I appreciate your reply, but I stand by my points. The title can mislead readers, and while tags help, sometimes authors don’t include all the appropriate tags, such as a good alignment tag and other time people don’t read the tags. Regarding the MC exposing himself early on, it’s fine if you like that, but I prefer more character development before such reveals. It makes the story richer in my view. For example, when he flies around looking for a place to train and conveniently comes across a crime with someone screaming for help, it felt forced to me. The timing was too perfect and disrupted the flow of the narrative. His interference exposed him to other superheroes and supervillains, which could cause problems, especially since he didn’t fully control his powers yet. The Superman comparison wasn’t meant to bash the MC but to highlight similarities that felt unoriginal to me. Yes, he might kill villains, but the overall vibe still feels like a Superman wannabe. I get that not everyone will see the plot as forced, but for me, it had moments that felt unnatural or too convenient.
JacK_Hanma
JacK_HanmaLv3

Gracias por tu comentario me evitaste perder tiempo.

Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

Man your just hating besides he's different krptonian because no krptonian was like that before I'm the universe

Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

There similar because his character is inspired by Superman besides its not like there the same exact character they act pretty different outside of being a hero this just doesn't seem like your type of story so your being biased against the good writing so quit reading this story and leave

Aboode:I appreciate your reply, but I stand by my points. The title can mislead readers, and while tags help, sometimes authors don’t include all the appropriate tags, such as a good alignment tag and other time people don’t read the tags. Regarding the MC exposing himself early on, it’s fine if you like that, but I prefer more character development before such reveals. It makes the story richer in my view. For example, when he flies around looking for a place to train and conveniently comes across a crime with someone screaming for help, it felt forced to me. The timing was too perfect and disrupted the flow of the narrative. His interference exposed him to other superheroes and supervillains, which could cause problems, especially since he didn’t fully control his powers yet. The Superman comparison wasn’t meant to bash the MC but to highlight similarities that felt unoriginal to me. Yes, he might kill villains, but the overall vibe still feels like a Superman wannabe. I get that not everyone will see the plot as forced, but for me, it had moments that felt unnatural or too convenient.
JohnnieWalker
JohnnieWalkerLv4

misleading aff.

Aboode
AboodeLv1

Misleading? The heroic tag wasn’t even there before—check my comment and see the author’s response. He added the tag after I pointed it out, so don’t accuse me of misleading anyone. This is my review; if you don’t like it, that’s your problem.

JohnnieWalker:misleading aff.
Aboode
AboodeLv1

Reviews are naturally biased, and I didn't drop by your comment or review to tell you to leave. Show some respect.

Kratos2785:There similar because his character is inspired by Superman besides its not like there the same exact character they act pretty different outside of being a hero this just doesn't seem like your type of story so your being biased against the good writing so quit reading this story and leave
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv5

Exactly! Atleast someone understands..

Lucius_SS
Lucius_SSLv4

I don't know how you can tell he added the heroic tag after your review, but I'll assume you're telling the truth. The thing is, it never had a villain or anti-hero tag. So you can still look at the tags and see something was missing.

Aboode:Misleading? The heroic tag wasn’t even there before—check my comment and see the author’s response. He added the tag after I pointed it out, so don’t accuse me of misleading anyone. This is my review; if you don’t like it, that’s your problem.
Kratos2785
Kratos2785Lv3

Yes I am biased and wrote a good review but also in that review I looked at it from a neutral standpoint and reviewed the writing and story telling and even tho some people don't like the story they can at least agree with me on that

Aboode
AboodeLv1

The frustrating thing is there are five star reviews with nothing but emojis and people come to call my review bias.

Kratos2785:Yes I am biased and wrote a good review but also in that review I looked at it from a neutral standpoint and reviewed the writing and story telling and even tho some people don't like the story they can at least agree with me on that
Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

I don't think many people are fans of "5 stars, the best story ever!!!!!" reviews either.

Aboode:The frustrating thing is there are five star reviews with nothing but emojis and people come to call my review bias.
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

both villian and anti hero are all overrated on this app , ppl on this app use villian tag as an excuse to write the most stupid and brain dead content ever , if u are incapable of writing a character with charisma , u have no business writing a villian , Only teenagers going to like villian mc on this app in particular , I should know i liked villian mc when i was still in puberty , as i got older , they went from cool to annoying , i am so glad ppl are writing good mcs this app is oversaturated with villians and anti heroes

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Eminence_TheGreen
Eminence_TheGreenLv4

but.....arent we here to read a fanfic.....why would we read the comics if we chose to read the fanfic.......i feel the average intelligence of webnovel readers has Fallen.

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