JohnnieWalker

thats ur wild fantasy? guy doesnt phuck

heresy

...terrible "writer"

MC never moves the damm plot is always passive in moving it, nothing rly changes utterly boring with an ok idea... skipping it.........................

MC is beta thru and thru,, why people like to read this crap. lots of grammars issues. try again....................... mediocre at best, lame

Habzone HL-18-66, also known as "The Torrent,

Author is edgy af, seems like NA virgin sheltered folks.

If you into watching everyone else besidesz the mc get some. Also wasnt a good mashup. Mediocre, feels like a eilion fake hope mc doesnt turn shota out of nowhere

Some failfic authors get off on that, so you get that.. plus the theme is a hodge podge mishmash of a mess