JohnnieWalker

Another simp shota author who koksuks mcs, I knew it was a mess when he couldnt ever remove the AI text and still make your/youre errors. Stuff has no build up.

thats ur wild fantasy? guy doesnt phuck

heresy

...terrible "writer"

MC never moves the damm plot is always passive in moving it, nothing rly changes utterly boring with an ok idea... skipping it.........................

MC is beta thru and thru,, why people like to read this crap. lots of grammars issues. try again....................... mediocre at best, lame

Habzone HL-18-66, also known as "The Torrent,

Author is edgy af, seems like NA virgin sheltered folks.

If you into watching everyone else besidesz the mc get some. Also wasnt a good mashup. Mediocre, feels like a eilion fake hope mc doesnt turn shota out of nowhere