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I love that you actually took time to make that lullaby sound nice and rhyme I love it
One thing I would like to say is that Z broly destroyed south galaxy which is infinite and holds and infinite amount of normal galaxies so Z broly is complex multiversle at the very least and the best feet that has been implied and not shown is Zeus saying something about the big bang and how his punch is a strong as it I think so Z broly alone would demolish them.
You know frankly I agree when I was reading this I expected him to have all the powers of Thor but they did a system instead of that I think that he should have slowly got the powers over time because his new body would have to adapt to them so that way it wouldn't be dependent on a system
I'm not very well versed in this theory but there's a theory of how something can be more powerful not omnipotent it's if you see it as fiction like in this story we see Rob is fiction so we are more powerful than him because we are real and he is not
No one is probably going to see this comment but from the evidence shown cat nap probably knew he was going to die cuz at first he backed away and fear but then embraced it and let the prototype kill him
Heh heh you're funny
Although I disagree with you I see your comment is you make a lot of good points and you know you are very respectful about it and I thank you for that cuz some people on this app aren't have a good day
Why are you getting so mad all I did was ask you a question but after this I'll stop asking you those because after your response it's clear your opinion matters very little.
How does it make it instantly s*** because has a word count chapter he's just trying to meet the word count and besides not like the next two chapters are extremely short or something?
This story has really stuck out to me because this guy has the Mc embody the character of broly in a way I think we all would imagine it being like also the story is fast paced and gets to the point without leaving a bunch of stuff out and doesn't take forever to get to the action. PS he doesn't downscale broly's power