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2024-11-07 20:09

too fast, and i can't feel the thrill from it's fight. even the romance is too bland. i mean is it anticlimactic story but why I feel it too bland?, well your explanation of enemies is too short. it's felt like even the juggernaut is just canon fodder. why it's suddenly become level 6??. anyway... you author did good work make the concept of adding Alfia skill on bell. but seriously? he don't have many interaction with character. (simply too short, i cant feel the soul of your work buddy) you got my five star on character design. and one star for world background. [this proud dragon gave you honest review ] **smug**

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Thanks for the Review, as for your concerns, I hope it‘ll be better as I go on, I am still sort of new to writing but thanks anyway.

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