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2024-10-13 00:33

I like the story a lot but you can't overlook how easily enemies seem to breach the fantastic 4s defenses and steal important data. Plot convenience. I rather you take a few more days to be more creative than rush it. when do people stop breaching his defenses? when does that end? is it going to happen again in the future? if not for the convenient plot device used id have give this 5 stars. His AI is awesome until it conveniently shouldn't be to push more story.

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agreed, bs plot

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