So far the story is interesting, different from other stories which focus more on power domination (I mean he is OP but he uses his cheats with different actions). The beginning of the storyline is also unpredictable. Like he is indeed OP but not all wishes can be achieved because he has cheats, that's one of the experiences of MC's growth. The story leads to building an empire so it requires a lot of human resources. Just a little criticism when the MC is too trusting of others or how he thinks about it towards new people. And fortunately these people are not selfish and play tricks behind the scenes. Maybe explain more clearly what his thoughts are. I was confused as to why the MC didn't use his cheat to negotiate with important people in other realms and maximize profits, but if you logic it carefully there is a high risk because in this story the MC only has one life and is at risk of being colonized by other realms in the future (remember humans only new visitors compared to other realms that are already strong). Oh yes, there are several other things that bother me, such as the event system which is not really shown and I think the prizes from the epic box are too small because in the story it is explained that even nascent souls fight for it. Thanks for the story. Opening of new views.
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Thank you for your review and suggestions. I am very happy with the criticism you gave. I will think about it seriously and try to improve it in the next chapter. 1. op mc: yes, I try to make mc wider. not only focus on increasing strength. I want humanity to survive in this new realm. 2. yes, almost everyone who is related to mc is very cooperative, not betraying. I will highlight and create scenes about their thoughts on mc (mayors of each district. leaders of other alliances, 10 core members, etc.) 3. mc does not negotiate with the leaders of other realms because it is not the time. the leader of a realm will not easily meet someone who is weak (current mc, at the inter-race war event is only Tier-3). so for now mc is only trying to build an alliance branch store. 4. yes I think it is also too little. it is true that newborn souls will be interested. I will make updates and try to increase their value such as artifacts, and high-level materials. thank you for reading. glad to hear it 🙏😁
Ur welcome. Thank you for the clarification and response. It's nice that the author is open-minded but don't forget the initial picture. This is just my personal opinion.
Riski_Bambang:Thank you for your review and suggestions. I am very happy with the criticism you gave. I will think about it seriously and try to improve it in the next chapter. 1. op mc: yes, I try to make mc wider. not only focus on increasing strength. I want humanity to survive in this new realm. 2. yes, almost everyone who is related to mc is very cooperative, not betraying. I will highlight and create scenes about their thoughts on mc (mayors of each district. leaders of other alliances, 10 core members, etc.) 3. mc does not negotiate with the leaders of other realms because it is not the time. the leader of a realm will not easily meet someone who is weak (current mc, at the inter-race war event is only Tier-3). so for now mc is only trying to build an alliance branch store. 4. yes I think it is also too little. it is true that newborn souls will be interested. I will make updates and try to increase their value such as artifacts, and high-level materials. thank you for reading. glad to hear it 🙏😁
