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Ur welcome. Thank you for the clarification and response. It's nice that the author is open-minded but don't forget the initial picture. This is just my personal opinion.

Wew dedikasi yang bagus, tidak semua org sanggup. Salam bambu runcing x:D

So far the story is interesting, different from other stories which focus more on power domination (I mean he is OP but he uses his cheats with different actions). The beginning of the storyline is also unpredictable. Like he is indeed OP but not all wishes can be achieved because he has cheats, that's one of the experiences of MC's growth. The story leads to building an empire so it requires a lot of human resources. Just a little criticism when the MC is too trusting of others or how he thinks about it towards new people. And fortunately these people are not selfish and play tricks behind the scenes. Maybe explain more clearly what his thoughts are. I was confused as to why the MC didn't use his cheat to negotiate with important people in other realms and maximize profits, but if you logic it carefully there is a high risk because in this story the MC only has one life and is at risk of being colonized by other realms in the future (remember humans only new visitors compared to other realms that are already strong). Oh yes, there are several other things that bother me, such as the event system which is not really shown and I think the prizes from the epic box are too small because in the story it is explained that even nascent souls fight for it. Thanks for the story. Opening of new views.

Semangat o.Od

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Most cultivation stories add yin or soul power to the enhanced ice element