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Jack_Blackber
Jack_BlackberLv17mth
2024-08-26 12:52

Having an interesting concept, born in the Aburame Clan, it had a good start, but when it reached the Uchiha Massacre Arc, the quality was still good, still worth reading, but over time it became filled with more and more nonsense typical of Chinese novels. Then the abilities of the main character (MC) increased too quickly; obtaining Time-Space abilities from Minato felt so easy, as if taking candy from a child. This became increasingly annoying, and it started to turn into a harem story, gathering many women in a very short time. It began to resemble most harem novels that collect women like collecting Pokémon. I started to lose interest in reading this novel; it felt more disgusting. Then, when it reached the Root member recruitment arc, it became very foolish. Root members have seals on their mouths so they cannot betray, yet they are recruited so easily. Even Yamato's transfer to Anbu required the Hokage's assistance, but this novel makes it seem as if taking Root members is as easy as stealing candy. The author of this novel is so terrible that I stopped reading it. Author, if you don't know about Naruto! Don't write a Naruto novel! If not, read the Naruto comic! Or at least watch the Naruto anime! How can you write such a terrible novel, yet many people like it! I am very puzzled by the readers who give it 5-star and 4-star ratings; they are either very foolish, brain-dead, or maybe because of the harem, all logic can be overlooked because it takes a lot of power to have a harem, like, oh! Because of the harem! The MC has to be overpowered, and everything can be overlooked. Damn it! This is why I hate fast-paced Chinese harem novels; they are so bad.

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DaoistObvious
DaoistObviousLv14

Agreed

_DaoOfReading_
_DaoOfReading_Lv1

Why can't Chinese make a decent novel without Harem like seriously one female lead and that's it, and no jade beauty or sword eyebrows nonsense. Also right now I am reading Death..... and me which has alot of chapters and I'm at like chapter 1.2k right now and still havn't gotten bored. Alot of stories quickly power the mc up in the middle and late stages, like they do what would take 10000 years in 1, they skip several stages a chapter, it's stupid. The speed drastically increases in this one as well but there are reasonable explanations and it doesn't last. It also has alot more details than normal novels.

DaoistxAddiT
DaoistxAddiTLv3

oh oh I advise you "my son-in-law is the strongest"

_DaoOfReading_:Why can't Chinese make a decent novel without Harem like seriously one female lead and that's it, and no jade beauty or sword eyebrows nonsense. Also right now I am reading Death..... and me which has alot of chapters and I'm at like chapter 1.2k right now and still havn't gotten bored. Alot of stories quickly power the mc up in the middle and late stages, like they do what would take 10000 years in 1, they skip several stages a chapter, it's stupid. The speed drastically increases in this one as well but there are reasonable explanations and it doesn't last. It also has alot more details than normal novels.
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

agreed, its like they always find a way to mess up a good story with an interesting start.

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6

I'd suggest reading life of a villain in naruto world if you haven't read it yet. Although it declined in the later chapters, in my opinion it's one of of the best naruto fanfics I've read. Also it's not harem.

_DaoOfReading_:Why can't Chinese make a decent novel without Harem like seriously one female lead and that's it, and no jade beauty or sword eyebrows nonsense. Also right now I am reading Death..... and me which has alot of chapters and I'm at like chapter 1.2k right now and still havn't gotten bored. Alot of stories quickly power the mc up in the middle and late stages, like they do what would take 10000 years in 1, they skip several stages a chapter, it's stupid. The speed drastically increases in this one as well but there are reasonable explanations and it doesn't last. It also has alot more details than normal novels.
Martial_Pursuit
Martial_PursuitLv4

Because translator pick trash over quality fanfic.

_DaoOfReading_:Why can't Chinese make a decent novel without Harem like seriously one female lead and that's it, and no jade beauty or sword eyebrows nonsense. Also right now I am reading Death..... and me which has alot of chapters and I'm at like chapter 1.2k right now and still havn't gotten bored. Alot of stories quickly power the mc up in the middle and late stages, like they do what would take 10000 years in 1, they skip several stages a chapter, it's stupid. The speed drastically increases in this one as well but there are reasonable explanations and it doesn't last. It also has alot more details than normal novels.
_DaoOfReading_
_DaoOfReading_Lv1

99.99% of chinese authors do that

Martial_Pursuit:Because translator pick trash over quality fanfic.
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