Jack_Blackber

Ouh damn! Charlotte Corday! Hehehe...:)

Having an interesting concept, born in the Aburame Clan, it had a good start, but when it reached the Uchiha Massacre Arc, the quality was still good, still worth reading, but over time it became filled with more and more nonsense typical of Chinese novels. Then the abilities of the main character (MC) increased too quickly; obtaining Time-Space abilities from Minato felt so easy, as if taking candy from a child. This became increasingly annoying, and it started to turn into a harem story, gathering many women in a very short time. It began to resemble most harem novels that collect women like collecting Pokémon. I started to lose interest in reading this novel; it felt more disgusting. Then, when it reached the Root member recruitment arc, it became very foolish. Root members have seals on their mouths so they cannot betray, yet they are recruited so easily. Even Yamato's transfer to Anbu required the Hokage's assistance, but this novel makes it seem as if taking Root members is as easy as stealing candy. The author of this novel is so terrible that I stopped reading it. Author, if you don't know about Naruto! Don't write a Naruto novel! If not, read the Naruto comic! Or at least watch the Naruto anime! How can you write such a terrible novel, yet many people like it! I am very puzzled by the readers who give it 5-star and 4-star ratings; they are either very foolish, brain-dead, or maybe because of the harem, all logic can be overlooked because it takes a lot of power to have a harem, like, oh! Because of the harem! The MC has to be overpowered, and everything can be overlooked. Damn it! This is why I hate fast-paced Chinese harem novels; they are so bad.