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2024-08-23 09:46

the writing leaves a lot to be desired. Conversations seem odd. Everything seems jarring with how quickly you're thrown into it and no build up of who or what our mc is about or how he came to be or their desires. People who are giving it 5 stars arent thinking very clearly.

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