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Lord_Kemoyin
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2024-08-09 22:16

The novel while nice, really isn't for me For one it's very fast paced, which while I don't hate it, really makes the author seem to gloss over some things Now, for what I hate, the MC always chases skirts. He's already grooming Ino and Hinata right from the first year of the academy and now he has Mikoto and is still chasing Kurotsuchi I just hate harems cause they just detract from the novel and it seems that the MC has nothing but women as his priority, whatever power he has just seems to be in the background Oh well if you enjoy harems this is for you just not my cup of tea

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Vlad_the_lost
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looks like it's a pdf file novel

Rex_Ashburn
Rex_AshburnLv3

Then why give a 4 star review?

Lord_Kemoyin
Lord_KemoyinLv4

because what turned me off it isn't something that most people here would find displeasing. And it really isn't that big of a deal, just a personal pet peeve

Rex_Ashburn:Then why give a 4 star review?
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Rex_Ashburn
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ooohh

Lord_Kemoyin:because what turned me off it isn't something that most people here would find displeasing. And it really isn't that big of a deal, just a personal pet peeve
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