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RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv144mth
2024-07-20 00:13

The novel's about a lad named Amon who died while trying to protect an old man. He left his brother behind and met a goddess who proceeded to send him in a novel. To be honest, this novel does have some potential. While the main character behaves weird often and starts crying in front of random people, his character is fine when he's normal. While his relationship with this one girl is progressing kinda fast, and the author doesn't exactly know how to write proper conversations between a guy and girl, down the road he could probably fix it. There's another character introduced that's actually a really small kid. Doesn't really feel like she acts her own age but this is something the author did even in his previous novel so we have no choice but to endure. The fights are detailed enough so that's a plus point. All the characters are supposed to have different personalities which will hopefully be fleshed out well in the future. Updates are regular until now and the world background seems quite big given how there's a lot of ranks and then gods too. There's a connection between our mc and the original protagonist of the novel which turns out into a friendly relationship. Kinda hope to see them mingle well like Ben and Kevin. Overall, I'd rate this novel a 3.8/5 as of now. Will probably change my rating later on. Recommend you guys to read this as you clearly don't have anything else to do, given how you read this long Ahh review.

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Tsukasa0
Tsukasa0Author

Thanks for your honest review! Although some parts don't make sense. For your first part, let me make it clear that all her encounters with him were explained and in the latest chapters, it has been 25 chapters since she has last appeared so I don't know what you are talking about. Second part, I don't know what kind of childhood you had but I think that's how 3 year olds are and I also confirmed it with people.You say she acts 9 or 10 but I think you need to use your brain and think again how a 9 year or 10 year old orphan in the streets would act. Thank you.

fantacia_000
fantacia_000Lv4

iam confused . it's shown in the synopsis that mc have to kill hero at the last . then why were they all like best budds rather than enemies . or is it that there will be break up in the future .

RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv14

From what I can see and have heard, it seems like Amon is fond of the protagonist of the novel and will find some way to avoid fulfilling the deal.

fantacia_000:iam confused . it's shown in the synopsis that mc have to kill hero at the last . then why were they all like best budds rather than enemies . or is it that there will be break up in the future .
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

Thanks for the warning

RayanArcadia:From what I can see and have heard, it seems like Amon is fond of the protagonist of the novel and will find some way to avoid fulfilling the deal.
sapient
sapientLv4

maaaaan, you seriously cannot take criticism

Tsukasa0:Thanks for your honest review! Although some parts don't make sense. For your first part, let me make it clear that all her encounters with him were explained and in the latest chapters, it has been 25 chapters since she has last appeared so I don't know what you are talking about. Second part, I don't know what kind of childhood you had but I think that's how 3 year olds are and I also confirmed it with people.You say she acts 9 or 10 but I think you need to use your brain and think again how a 9 year or 10 year old orphan in the streets would act. Thank you.
Tsukasa0
Tsukasa0Author

and you cant hop off a novel without hating on it my guy, get a life

sapient:maaaaan, you seriously cannot take criticism
Daemon_Sultan
Daemon_SultanLv4

there is a reason why the review section exists

Tsukasa0:and you cant hop off a novel without hating on it my guy, get a life
Tsukasa0
Tsukasa0Author

It exists for genuine criticism I think?

Daemon_Sultan:there is a reason why the review section exists
Daemon_Sultan
Daemon_SultanLv4

It was a genuine criticism from his part, you are just not able to accept it due to your fragile ego. Every novel has its own bad writings, yours is the same. At the end just accept it and try to see what you can improve overall. Both of us may be wrong but at the end of the day it's just a novel. Anyways have a nice day

Tsukasa0:It exists for genuine criticism I think?
DoomofTennos
DoomofTennosLv14

good to know that I should pass on this

RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv14

I dropped it too, Correct choice ✅

DoomofTennos:good to know that I should pass on this
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

and how many chapters did you read before you did that? well, it's your choice.... but you never get to know what lies ahead. Creation is not as easy as it looks.... sometimes the author just needs a bit more time to get things spicy..... take it from a failed author [img=sad]

RayanArcadia:I dropped it too, Correct choice ✅
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

you should just glance through some chapters first, maybe that way you'll know if it's good for you..... Don't judge from others perspective, try to get your own view.

DoomofTennos:good to know that I should pass on this
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

Lol, your words are indeed very true, but you should also consider a lot of things as well.... sometimes, most people just make instant reviews on what little chapters they've read. Not every good story starts with a wonderful begining

Daemon_Sultan:It was a genuine criticism from his part, you are just not able to accept it due to your fragile ego. Every novel has its own bad writings, yours is the same. At the end just accept it and try to see what you can improve overall. Both of us may be wrong but at the end of the day it's just a novel. Anyways have a nice day
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

lol, that was a bit harsh and funny.... sometimes, it's best you just ignore. They have no idea

Tsukasa0:and you cant hop off a novel without hating on it my guy, get a life
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

well altogether, I don't really see anything bad with your review. It's genuine. Good one

RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv14

Enough chapters to make an unbiased judgement

The_Broken_Author:and how many chapters did you read before you did that? well, it's your choice.... but you never get to know what lies ahead. Creation is not as easy as it looks.... sometimes the author just needs a bit more time to get things spicy..... take it from a failed author [img=sad]
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

i figured..... my bad

RayanArcadia:Enough chapters to make an unbiased judgement
The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

i figured..... my bad

RayanArcadia:Enough chapters to make an unbiased judgement
westley
westleyLv2

I was gonna read but this author is very clearly an immature child. If you are going to complain about valid criticism and then get combative... don't expect support. This type of behavior is embarrassing.

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Vainglory0
Vainglory0Lv4

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athex
athexModerator

An excerpt from someone I know, "THIS WILL REACH THE PEAK". As one of the moderators, and one of the people who helped author plan this book, I shall give a review. I will start off by stating, yes "stating", that the FML is none other than "Changing Star" Nephis. So anyone, especially that other reader over there, saying the FML is someone else is completely wrong. Anyway, on to the review, this book definitely has POTENTIAL. Compared to the author's other book, the plot in this novel completely detracted from the complexities of CDO or, "Coming Down on Olympiad". Author has switched up his writing style, making this novel an easy read. You can surmise from this review if you plan on criticizing the less-descriptive writing, and more straight to the point. If that isn't for you, then no need to drop a 1 star review about it. (Totally didn't happen to me.) To talk about the novel, just like most novels in this platform, it circulates around the academy genre, but it's still written interestingly, so as to not bore the readers. Our MC is none other than Choso from JJK with his Blood Cursed Technique, with a mix of Amon Moretti from LOTM of the Mysteries. There's not much to say about the story development since the novel is still starting out, but as I stated, there is POTENTIAL. Update stability wise, do not fret since the author isn't named "Crypthh", so that leaves a lot to be desired. To increase my wordcount, I'll be taking an excerpt from MYSELF: Gomen, Amanai. I’m not even angry over you right now. I bear no grudge against anyone. It’s just that the world feels so, so wonderful right now. Throughout Heaven and Earth, I alone am the honored one.

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