The novel's about a lad named Amon who died while trying to protect an old man. He left his brother behind and met a goddess who proceeded to send him in a novel. To be honest, this novel does have some potential. While the main character behaves weird often and starts crying in front of random people, his character is fine when he's normal. While his relationship with this one girl is progressing kinda fast, and the author doesn't exactly know how to write proper conversations between a guy and girl, down the road he could probably fix it. There's another character introduced that's actually a really small kid. Doesn't really feel like she acts her own age but this is something the author did even in his previous novel so we have no choice but to endure. The fights are detailed enough so that's a plus point. All the characters are supposed to have different personalities which will hopefully be fleshed out well in the future. Updates are regular until now and the world background seems quite big given how there's a lot of ranks and then gods too. There's a connection between our mc and the original protagonist of the novel which turns out into a friendly relationship. Kinda hope to see them mingle well like Ben and Kevin. Overall, I'd rate this novel a 3.8/5 as of now. Will probably change my rating later on. Recommend you guys to read this as you clearly don't have anything else to do, given how you read this long Ahh review.
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LIKEThanks for your honest review! Although some parts don't make sense. For your first part, let me make it clear that all her encounters with him were explained and in the latest chapters, it has been 25 chapters since she has last appeared so I don't know what you are talking about. Second part, I don't know what kind of childhood you had but I think that's how 3 year olds are and I also confirmed it with people.You say she acts 9 or 10 but I think you need to use your brain and think again how a 9 year or 10 year old orphan in the streets would act. Thank you.
From what I can see and have heard, it seems like Amon is fond of the protagonist of the novel and will find some way to avoid fulfilling the deal.
fantacia_000:iam confused . it's shown in the synopsis that mc have to kill hero at the last . then why were they all like best budds rather than enemies . or is it that there will be break up in the future .
maaaaan, you seriously cannot take criticism
Tsukasa0:Thanks for your honest review! Although some parts don't make sense. For your first part, let me make it clear that all her encounters with him were explained and in the latest chapters, it has been 25 chapters since she has last appeared so I don't know what you are talking about. Second part, I don't know what kind of childhood you had but I think that's how 3 year olds are and I also confirmed it with people.You say she acts 9 or 10 but I think you need to use your brain and think again how a 9 year or 10 year old orphan in the streets would act. Thank you.
It was a genuine criticism from his part, you are just not able to accept it due to your fragile ego. Every novel has its own bad writings, yours is the same. At the end just accept it and try to see what you can improve overall. Both of us may be wrong but at the end of the day it's just a novel. Anyways have a nice day
Tsukasa0:It exists for genuine criticism I think?
and how many chapters did you read before you did that? well, it's your choice.... but you never get to know what lies ahead. Creation is not as easy as it looks.... sometimes the author just needs a bit more time to get things spicy..... take it from a failed author [img=sad]
RayanArcadia:I dropped it too, Correct choice ✅
Lol, your words are indeed very true, but you should also consider a lot of things as well.... sometimes, most people just make instant reviews on what little chapters they've read. Not every good story starts with a wonderful begining
Daemon_Sultan:It was a genuine criticism from his part, you are just not able to accept it due to your fragile ego. Every novel has its own bad writings, yours is the same. At the end just accept it and try to see what you can improve overall. Both of us may be wrong but at the end of the day it's just a novel. Anyways have a nice day
Enough chapters to make an unbiased judgement
The_Broken_Author:and how many chapters did you read before you did that? well, it's your choice.... but you never get to know what lies ahead. Creation is not as easy as it looks.... sometimes the author just needs a bit more time to get things spicy..... take it from a failed author [img=sad]