Author, the story development and world building are quite good. This is just a suggestion but if you apply it to the story then the vastness of power structure of characters will increase. this will increase interest & anticipation of the readers . "<Suggestions>" 1) You should add more elements to the story like [Force, magnetism, curse, metal, wood, mass, structure manipulation (means atom manipulation), heat, light, radiation, poison, corruption]. 2) Add some special abilities to other characters like {summoning / mind control / physical transformation} etc. 3) [Force] / [Mass] can also be a called Reality Element. Force can also obtain through "ELEMENT INTEGRATION" of [Mass + Gravity] element. If you saw this review, then I want to thank you for writing such a good novel.👍🏻
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LIKEbro, give mc some kinda "[Infinity Shield]" like gojo. isn't void is advance space, then it's possible right ? & add some "Domain Expansion" like attacks. they are kinda cool in fights .
Tsukasa0:Thank you for your review! As for your elements, as long as they dont mess with the plot and balance of the power system, I'll try to follow it. Thank you for this suggestion!
Yes,he will get those kind of attacks because of Void in the future, don't worry. Right now hes's still a little weak,so you will need to have patience
FlameShadow:bro, give mc some kinda "[Infinity Shield]" like gojo. isn't void is advance space, then it's possible right ? & add some "Domain Expansion" like attacks. they are kinda cool in fights .image
author, If you are gonna integrate "[blood]" & "[lighting] " element then, I have a suggestion name that element [Death] element (depicted as red lighting in many books) Because if you think about it nothingness / void is a state of any matter. so in the case of living beings death can be depicted as a pre process of nothingness. after death it can decomposed (naturally) that's why I think it will good to have void and death element as combo for amon / herald of nothingness. it's just a suggestion you can apply it .
Tsukasa0:Yes,he will get those kind of attacks because of Void in the future, don't worry. Right now hes's still a little weak,so you will need to have patience
I'll think about it
DeathVoid:author, If you are gonna integrate "[blood]" & "[lighting] " element then, I have a suggestion name that element [Death] element (depicted as red lighting in many books) Because if you think about it nothingness / void is a state of any matter. so in the case of living beings death can be depicted as a pre process of nothingness. after death it can decomposed (naturally) that's why I think it will good to have void and death element as combo for amon / herald of nothingness. it's just a suggestion you can apply it .
isn't void eyes kinda work as a obito's "Kamui" to teleport in different space/ void state where any attacks(magical & physical both) can't work on him
Tsukasa0:Yes,he will get those kind of attacks because of Void in the future, don't worry. Right now hes's still a little weak,so you will need to have patience