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The goat uploaded a new novel and I'm all here for it after reading his previous work. Keep cooking fam

A peak new album by mage- I mean darkcrafter. Can't wait to see how many new albums he cooks and delivers before GTA VI. Keep it up mage- I mean darkcrafter

in your monologue

Twinkle Twinkle, little star. How I wonder what you are? Don't mind me and just be what you are, because I don't remember what comes after this as I am in a state of bliss with my miss

thick magma is crazy dawg 💀💀💀

I don't think I can take much more, it ain't right if I fake what's true

Aight, Young Sosa on the review h * *. (Sorry for putting this off a little late, I had my exam. I think I passed.) Anyways, this a detailed review for my bro, Za hard. One of the few ones that I do. I'll be frank. I want to make this much longer because of how good the novel and writing it is, but at the time of writing this, it's almost 12AM and my eyes are re ** er than ALL RE * by certain someone. For you lazy boys, check PTSD at the end. (Yes, I still don't remember what it's called.) Before starting this review, I want to clarify that I indeed am quite a bit into this novel. Not caught up, yes but read alot. If some ne * d pops up in the comments saying 'Oh, well your reading status says ch 1. Please go buy new glasses. That said, like always, this is one of the only few detailed reviews I do. Not a moderator or anything. The author is my friend, homie and bro, yes. But does that count in this review? No. This is a completely unbiased review. Let's get on to the main part now shall we. Writing Quality: Flawless. Out of all these 5 stages of review rap here, this is easily my favorite one. Not to brag but, I, have been reading novels since 2020. And yes, I definitely mean a shi * to * of novels. (Includes Both Traditional and Webnovel) And I would like to easily state this that the author has easily some of the best 3rd POV writing I have seen. (No glaze but sure, KRISPY KREME DONUTS, WE GEE *** - I MEAN GLAZIN') Before the same ne * d from before compla ** s that it isn't that good, I'll just say it here that its because WN readers don't like this type of style. You can easily see the author is much more inspired from trad novels by authors like Brand On Sand and some others. So, if it's too advanced and good for you, nothing I can do really. Issue Skill ig. Moving on to the next track. Stability of Updates: Consistent and Peak. I can't lie, as an author, I can't appreciate you more if you keep this on your top throughout the whole span of your novel. This, to me, matters more than any other segment to be honest. Especially when, the author can push out 2 chapters per day minimum with full quality and effort, something that a lot of authors stru ** le to do, me myself. This is one of the things that's very hard to keep consistent and yet Za hard, has done an exceptional job on this icl can't lie. Story Development: Top-tier. Ngl gonna lie, the switch of the story, the settling of everything and how it all unfolds from the start and how the author explains it is something I actually try to inspire myself from this novel. The first few early chapters of a novel are something that I stru**le to do good a lot, especially in terms of story. Za hard, however, completely na**ed this aspect with how he showed their circumstances, did flashbacks and a various other things while at the same time keeping it so good in place, that never, did anything felt out of place. Bro - ski definitely pluto - ski'd on that one. Character Design: Co* ked. Along with the S.D. no, this means Story Development, not Str ** s Dis- ** der. Anyways, along with S.D, this is something that was related to that aspect in the sense that this part plays a major role in perfecting that aspect. So important that it helped na ** it to the point like Tee zo. Anyways, but honestly though, the interactions in the flashbacks, the character's personality, their past. How author explains all that with also subtle facial cues while not just blatantly stating their personalities like a million other Extra novels. Definitely a big reason to give this novel a try. World Background: One of the also major aspects like the previous two that author definitely needs to make up for it, in the start when novel's just starting out; A lot of authors stru * gle to perfect this aspect, often doing many info dumps and such, but this new author co* ked. By doing flashbacks and slowly taking the MC form place to place, the author revealed everything in such a way that it never felt like an info du*p. Also the fact that the world building this novel is miles more unique than all other ge * eric extra novels out there. PTSD: What can I say? If my above ya * wasn't enough to convince you then nothing I can do. Can't give the time you wasted reading all that. I'm Pakistani after all. In any case, genuinely, go read this novel, I sw * ar you won't regret it. This, my boy Za hard and his novel are just as underrated as Denzel Curry. He needs some recognition bruh. So all I can say is for this novel at the end is..... MUSTREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD

1st. Yo'ho tryna hit this, uh, I guess I can take one too

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