Weird.Just weird. 178 chapters waiting for him to die and ascend to a new world or something.Not to mention the fact this feels like every character is bending over for him which I dislike.Thirdly the beginning of the story was so amazing but this is really like really really dragged the hell out.Im not going to lie I thought this would be a cooler story but it's just a very long death date which should've ended 79 chapters ago.I really am not understand what else u can possibly write about.How many more chapters until bro dies. The story development is so weird as well.The whole premise of the story was set around him dying but then he randomly in such a short time frame went from an F level spirit to a B and A level spirit.When I say short I'm saying like 30 chapters.His goal was to be an S class and die.If he can jump from F to B and A in less than 30 chapters why is it taking a whole 150 more chapters for an S class.He litteraly wants to die and I thought this was a world jumping or Era jumping type of fanfic by the way I was going.Then 40 chapters went by...50 went by...80...90..169..He still isn't deaf what the hell is this bro.?If ur going to drag the story just say that cause I want my time back.
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