It's excellent 👌. But it hardly feels like a fanfic of Naruto. But if tou consider it as an individual novel, then it's good. Characters are very realistic, but these counterparts don't match the OG characters in Naruto. At least, the ones who interacted with Main Leads. Their names are also strange as they possessed bodies which already have had their identities. So shouldn't their name be Japanese or at least resemble Japanese instead of American? While the story isn't very fast paced, but MLs are getting stronger at alarming speed. And for some reason, ML Otsutsuki clan is Konohagakure. Shouldn't he be in space with Toneri or even at the Otsutsuki clan? And how is he learning jutsus? Why is like a complete normal shinobi? And Otsutsuki's should look different from humans, so why isn't he questioned? And seeing a Jesus follower, especially in Naruto anime seems really odd. Well, it's not Naruto anime. In the starting, the antagonist I will say, explained that it's a world similar to Naruto, but not Naruto. So all my previous points are invalid. But I just wanted to share my thoughts. I hope you enjoy this novel further and it does well in the future.
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Really appreciate this review, mate. While our novel isn't as popular or expansive as some of the more prestigious one, we do deliver what we can. And because of this fabulous review, we've gone ahead and released three chapters ahead of schedule for today!
