AkitoTakahashi

Haha. Yes. Like we commented early, Arthur is merely recounting the matches that originally took place.

Yes, she is. In this paragraph, Arthur is recounting how the original story went.

New authors. You gotta love them. Whether they're skilled or just imaginative to want to write a book, we like to see what they're made of. First things first, we cannot recommend this to our Christian readers. I'm sure some of you understand why. The book's just been released at the time of this review. So let's see what we have. Fantasy and bureaucratic absurdity—check. An MC who's a burned-out office worker? Also check. Know what that means? You guessed it: Isekai. The MC's sharp, has some humour and seems a little clever. I mean, when you're in a high-stakes fantasy world, the undertone of the story already takes shape. Good thing Clown has some wits; otherwise, this might fail sooner than later.

Ah, lust, that age-old sin that men (and women) can't seem to stop. Now, if you're an avid follower of me, you'll know that I would never recommend this to anyone due to the evil nature inside these pages. Ya know: devils, sacrifices, and rituals. Notwithstanding, Zexusgo seems to wish to refine their writing craft. Let's see if we can give him pointers. So the story takes place in this fantasy world that centers on betrayal, transformation, and some survival. Zexusgo employs LITRPG mechanics, so it's clear where this story is headed. Ishar (the MC) is basically sacrificed to a devil (Satanic) by his comrades, which is where his journey begins. Zexusgo does a great job pacing things; we'll give him that. I think it's due to the LITRPG aspect because his action scenes are interesting enough to understand. Do we like Ishar? Heck no. Haha. He's a little complex that struggles too much after transforming. That's good, though, because it allows readers to understand him more. I favour Kael more. That or Rudrik. So you better not slack off on them, Zexusgo. Here are the things to improve on: explaining the LITRPG system so readers aren't lost on Ishar's ability sets, a better background to understand why Ishar was betrayed, and better dialogue (since they seem forced). This is Akito, hoping those who are lost may come to Jesus Christ as their Lord and Saviour.

This was actuallly a great idea. Had we known ahead of time, we would have most likely implemented it 🫶

So the author who created "Null Reincarnation - Return Of The Fourth Primordial" has decided to start fresh with this new novel. And boy, his skills have increased since. For those who aren't aware, I really, really can't recommend any novels to anyone that aren't Christian-based. However, as an author, I am allowed to thoroughly examine others and review their work. I mean, when you write a lot of chapters and have dreams of succeeding in writing, you deserve to be reviewed. Right? Here we have another dystopian-style world where survival is (once again) the major theme. Firstly, mate, at the time of this review, that was a very long synopsis. Lol. Secondly, Ishizaki (the MC) has got to be either really fortunate or absolutely cursed for finding Solus. Who's Solus? Oh, you know, your typical sentient AI filled with "Q-energy." Not like we all don't have those lying around in our backyards. Lol. If you like tyrants that oppress a poor society with an MC that fights for said poor society, cliffhangers, advanced techno mysteries, and science fiction, then maybe this is worth looking into. Again, not for our Christian readers.

If you follow us, you'll know that we're not into stories like these. But here we have Missnormal, who seems to wish to delve into her writing skills. Let's see what she has to offer. So the premise goes like this: survival is a challenge where a cruel game is mandated by a lottery system that selects teenagers to battle terrifying creatures. Hunger games? Nope. Divergent? Let's chill out now. Here we have the MC, Olivia, who seems like an ordinary girl until she's betrayed by her own family and forced into the game. What's the catch, author? Oh, she has a system. Ya know, those magic translucent prompts that pop up. While only five chapters in, it's evident things can get emotional. You'll know what we mean if you understand Freya's character. Again... Hunger Games, anyone? Now, there are tons of spacing issues that need to be addressed. The grammar, while not terrible, could also be improved for smoother reading. This tells us that Missnormal is still somewhat new when it comes to writing. I'll guess that she's a young adult, which is not bad. What might stand out about this story is it somewhat tackles the notion of how to survive a society structured around the powerful versus powerless. Sort of sounds like earth!