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Let's just say we've read a lot of novels to know what we're doing. For those interested in reading advanced chapters of "Path Of War," our Patreon link is: https://www.patreon.com/akitosbooks.

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  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi2 days ago
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  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi3 days ago
    Posted

    This is actually our second time reviewing this novel. If you follow is, you'll know that this isn't our cup of tea, nor are we prone to recommending this to our Christian readers. Nonetheless, the author was bold enough to bring it to our table. Let's begin, shall we. So, here we have yet another science fiction and fantasy story. Basically, it's set in this dystopian world where people struggle against these things called "Krillians." Aria, the main character, was written quite well. You know, the emotional turmoil dude who lost his parents and now wants to take revenge. I wonder where Shadow_garden got that idea from. Lol. Anyways, the current chapters are written well enough to read, and the author had some fine introductions to the story flowing. Apart from the overused trope, it might be an interesting read for those that are into vengeful novels.

  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi22 days ago
    Replied to LITTLE_LYTA

    Looks like AI's getting sloppy with their reviews these days 🤔

  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi23 days ago
    Posted

    Skyrim sure does take on a whole new meaning with this one. Alright, that was a joke. But on the more "reviewy" side of things, here we have an MC that's (and you guessed it) reincarnated into a world filled with dragons, yada yada. Not being a fantasy man myself, but a Christian, it's imperative that we look past the genre and see what the author's trying to convey. So, the premise seems to be more on the comical side while mixing in that fantasy-type of lore most are used to. Some of the phrases like "DragonHeart" really make me feel like I'm reading a story out of a video game. But hey, when your MC's a mix of different fantastical creatures often read about in folklore, it's apparent that the author's really trying to fill the reader's heart with some adventure tales. How about the side characters? Well, not surprisingly, most of them are written quite well. Reborn in a new world where war's apparent? Here are two parents: a Duke and a Duchess. Speaking of the new world, not too bad, author. The world-building was crafted well enough for me to know that there's enough out there in this universe for you (as a writer) to also explore. Just don't let your imagination run too wild. Lol. We'll end things off by saying that this novel's not on the whole dark side and has some funny quips. If you like heartwarming family bonding as a beginning trope, then just maybe your journey in this novel might be an interesting one. That's considering that this review was written with less than chapters released.

  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi23 days ago
    Posted

    Once again we have the atypical "I wanna be a devil" story. No offense, author. So let's set aside the evil, horn-killing theme of this novel and tackle what the writer tried to portray. Here's a VRMMORPG that takes the concept of a video game to a different level—no pun intended. Kenji's kinda weird at first until he embraces being a necromancer. Quite certain the author's played more than enough fantasy/adventure games; otherwise, he wouldn't have been able to write an interesting world. Now onto pacing. Where most struggle with this, he didn't do a bad job. So, Kenji goes from some type of bad a** to a necromancer. You'd think he'd just jump in and start wreaking havoc, but no, there's actually exploration to his past. What about other characters? Well, as if Merlin wasn't your generic kind of name that hints to you-know-what, they're actually not written badly. I'd say this novel's a troubling competition once the narrative reaches its peak. Can I recommend it to my Christian audience? Absolutely not. Can I say the author is a bona fide writer who knows how to format a book in the style of introducing leveling and stats? Oh yeah.

  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi2 months ago
    Replied to sainticide

    We really appreciate this comment and all your past ones. Because of your consistency, the author has mentioned you in one of his chapters. Once again, thank you and God bless. May you enjoy your winter vacation. May Christ be with you. 🙏

  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi2 months ago
    Posted

    Oh, love stories. Ash, who broke your heart, or which woman out there are you trying to marry? Haha. This little tale is an interesting concoction of youthful exuberance, emotions, and interwoven narratives about, well, romance. Billy Scott, our university student, has a strange past due to the trauma. He's pretty clumsy with women. And by women, I mean just Amy. And guess what? She's a professor at that college. Yep, it's one of those romantic stories. Is Amy an angel? No, sir! She's got quite the multifaceted persona. Ash, however, does a fair job at excelling the narrative. He's either in college or recently graduated/dropped out. You can tell because of how he portrays the story's environment. The only thing "wrong" is the occasionally meandering into soap opera territory, particularly with the melodramatic love declarations and somewhat predictable misunderstandings. Apart from that, it's really just youthful folly.

  • AkitoTakahashi
    AkitoTakahashi2 months ago
    Posted

    If you've been following us for x amount of time, you'll know that stories like these are not our cup of tea. After all, we maintain an unshakeable Christian status quo. That, of course, does not prevent us from seeing new authors trying to refine their skills in this (somewhat) doggy-style environment. Fundz, or "Da Fundz," as some of you may know him by, has one dark imagination. The elements of horror, fantasy, and maybe a little self-discovery are clear in these pages. Valyn's basically tormented by evil spirits. What he needs is Jesus Christ in his life. Because of that, he eventually finds himself in "Andraxyl." Interesting setup there, Fundz. So there's myth and modernity involved in this new world. Valyn only seems to be compelling enough to tolerate. Let's just hope he doesn't become an emotional wreck. The prose has both intensity and humour and the pacing is actually really well. Definitely a lot of adrenaline-pump action scenes juxtaposed against quieter introspective moments. Enthralling tale? Yes. My cup of tea that I would recommend to my Christian readers. Lol. No!