It’s better than I expected. The first few chapters are a little rougher but I love the story so far This max reminds me of a more likable Jonathan and a overall better mc.
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Thank you for such an honest review. We'll try our best to remain consistent with both the plot and all the characters. Because of this review, we've released extra chapters ahead of schedule. Both you and other readers deserve it.
Thank you very much author.
AkitoTakahashi:Thank you for such an honest review. We'll try our best to remain consistent with both the plot and all the characters. Because of this review, we've released extra chapters ahead of schedule. Both you and other readers deserve it.
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I understand that and I feel like that’s one of the things that can only be explained by saying ‘’magic haha go brr’’ it’s like that with uchiha eyes too they switch em like lightbulbs if you try not to focus on this little thing tho perhaps you’ll enjoy the story more the author is one of my favorite so I’d still give it a shot.
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I'll try to read it later
Wizened:I understand that and I feel like that’s one of the things that can only be explained by saying ‘’magic haha go brr’’ it’s like that with uchiha eyes too they switch em like lightbulbs if you try not to focus on this little thing tho perhaps you’ll enjoy the story more the author is one of my favorite so I’d still give it a shot.
We greatly appreciate your defending the novel and your kind words. Some obnoxious devils may target this novel because of its contents. And it offends us when we explicitly write in the preface, "If your reviews are bad, both the author and I will remove them. Not for the sake of keeping the novel with high ratings, but because we genuinely can't tolerate users who leave biased comments without adhering to the tags." While not all the chapters are perfectly written and the story's still in its beginning stages, it's true readers like you that we take into consideration. As such, we're releasing multiple chapters ahead of schedule.
That’s very well put, have a great day.
AkitoTakahashi:We greatly appreciate your defending the novel and your kind words. Some obnoxious devils may target this novel because of its contents. And it offends us when we explicitly write in the preface, "If your reviews are bad, both the author and I will remove them. Not for the sake of keeping the novel with high ratings, but because we genuinely can't tolerate users who leave biased comments without adhering to the tags." While not all the chapters are perfectly written and the story's still in its beginning stages, it's true readers like you that we take into consideration. As such, we're releasing multiple chapters ahead of schedule.
Is this fanfic really good?
It’s up to preference but I personally enjoy it
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