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Tazrune
TazruneLv38mth
2024-05-28 13:52

This is very good, excited for more. the only thing I think could be different is the whole first person and just use normal third-person pronouns.

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Avi2112
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Yeah can't help it. i have written it as a SI from the start πŸ˜…

Avi2112
Avi2112Author

thank you! 😊

Ballad
BalladLv5

Imagine reading this here instead of Fiction Live. Where we get all the awesome Images that are 10/10

ByTha1
ByTha1Lv5

yeah it getting confusing for me

Somnus_Senior
Somnus_SeniorLv4

I haven't read it yet, but this is my general opinion about books and pov: I don't care, but keep thoughts and narration with a clear difference. For example: This is narrative 'This is first pov thoughts' "This is dialogue between characters" Character name: This is another way to difference characters. I will start reading the book. :)

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