Item: A Mutant Collector Quest
Rating: 1
Author: Rimuru_2412

Rimuru_2412Lv136mth

2024-08-29 02:41

la historia es buena hasta el cap (no me acuerdo Xddd) en mi opinión lo que paso fue que el prota se volvió un corredor 🏃‍♂️ 🏃‍♂️ que quiero decir con eso esque no se queda quieto no quiero decir que me gusten las historias lentas (de echo siento que esta novela avanza muy lentamente ) lo que quiero decir con corredor es que no han explorado lo suficiente con los personajes que salen al inicio y las relaciones con los personajes, actualmente estoy dejando acumular cap pero lla llevo más de 10 días y no pasa de la bella de airon man nt. y la personalidad de Tony es muy rara por decir lo menos

A Mutant Collector Quest

Avi2112

4.6

214 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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CouchPotatoDandyLv5

Since you are lazy enough to put your review in a Google translate and translate it to English and post it here so we can understand what you want to say, I too am lazy enough to do that. But I totally agree with you my bro.

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David_Miguel_7816Lv3

I think he said the story is pretty much rushed, the pace is too fast and author doesnt bother with side character development

CouchPotatoDandy:Since you are lazy enough to put your review in a Google translate and translate it to English and post it here so we can understand what you want to say, I too am lazy enough to do that. But I totally agree with you my bro.

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