It was good until the MC decided to upload the martial techniques he got from another world without any preparation. I mean wasn’t he worried about them finding out about the door? Yes he wants to avoid being conscripted but at least there should be an explanation as to why he uploaded it without hesitation or worry that it might backfire on him cause how is he supposed to explain its origin I just hope it doesn’t continue going downhill from there
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Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).
I’ve read further and I understand the problem is those kinds of situations should be further explained and used as an opportunity to build up on the world development although the author did it later it affects the reading experience Imagine if the MC is in a world where his sect is the strongest in the world but we as readers don’t know then he proceeds to do something that would cause him major trouble if his sect wasn’t the strongest in the world wouldn’t he look foolish and some people might skip before realizing the truth
Eimin:Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).
I agree it’s interesting
Eimin:Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).
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bro, I hopped off on chapter 3 after reading some inconsistencies where within sentences of each other he needs a way to get out of the draft, he gets such way, he doesn't want to use it because if it's found out he'll experience something worse? (as in dude literally asked for a way out and got it and out of nowhere its the worst thing that could happen with no prior mention as to why besides they'll do a lot worse than forced conscription) and then he explains why he shouldn't use it( it might leave traces) and then he says well its not like I've left yet and uses it. If the Author can't clearly drive the plot, that's an issue, if he is unsure of how to move the story, it should be the MCs inner monolog that shows the indecision. instead we get his writing all over the place with word vomit of baseless assumptions as filler, and then MCs decisive actions completely separated from the Authors weak drive of the story. from the other reviews I've seen, MC starts acting as indecisive as the writing, and everyone else says the best thing about this story is the world and concept. What made me drop seems to be a constant from your review,so I'll step off here.
Yeah you're write I'm mainly reading it to see the cultivation realms and how the world expands also about the indecisiveness and inconsistencies the author usually explains them later which is quite annoying but at least reduces the effect on the plot
DaoistKushMountain:bro, I hopped off on chapter 3 after reading some inconsistencies where within sentences of each other he needs a way to get out of the draft, he gets such way, he doesn't want to use it because if it's found out he'll experience something worse? (as in dude literally asked for a way out and got it and out of nowhere its the worst thing that could happen with no prior mention as to why besides they'll do a lot worse than forced conscription) and then he explains why he shouldn't use it( it might leave traces) and then he says well its not like I've left yet and uses it. If the Author can't clearly drive the plot, that's an issue, if he is unsure of how to move the story, it should be the MCs inner monolog that shows the indecision. instead we get his writing all over the place with word vomit of baseless assumptions as filler, and then MCs decisive actions completely separated from the Authors weak drive of the story. from the other reviews I've seen, MC starts acting as indecisive as the writing, and everyone else says the best thing about this story is the world and concept. What made me drop seems to be a constant from your review,so I'll step off here.
overall the story is one of those you in between complex novels
DaoistKushMountain:bro, I hopped off on chapter 3 after reading some inconsistencies where within sentences of each other he needs a way to get out of the draft, he gets such way, he doesn't want to use it because if it's found out he'll experience something worse? (as in dude literally asked for a way out and got it and out of nowhere its the worst thing that could happen with no prior mention as to why besides they'll do a lot worse than forced conscription) and then he explains why he shouldn't use it( it might leave traces) and then he says well its not like I've left yet and uses it. If the Author can't clearly drive the plot, that's an issue, if he is unsure of how to move the story, it should be the MCs inner monolog that shows the indecision. instead we get his writing all over the place with word vomit of baseless assumptions as filler, and then MCs decisive actions completely separated from the Authors weak drive of the story. from the other reviews I've seen, MC starts acting as indecisive as the writing, and everyone else says the best thing about this story is the world and concept. What made me drop seems to be a constant from your review,so I'll step off here.
lmao that's not even that of massive problem The thing you should cry about is that it's only ranked 93. And not even based on the whole alliance but only on one planet. Then his peak power doesn't even qualify for 2nd rank evolver.
Theres a pretty basic reason for that. The human race is one of the strongest ones, with up to 12th rank evolvers, and they are very united, since there are many other peak clans. So as long as he doesnt betray the humans, being talented will only grant him even more support. Naturally theres some Supression, but not by the main powers and his Information is also encrypted by the 3 goddesses
Eimin:Well, I don't think he was wrong about uploading it. It was already mentioned many times, that the three AI are the one maintaining the order of society. If you read further in the story, that you would have noticed, that his personal information is highly encrypted my the Goddess of Wisdom. Anyway, I find the novel quite interesting and enjoyable (read only the free chapters).
Yours actually isn't a problem I meant the levels go up to 12 and their world has a few million years of history of trying to get as many techniques as possible the fact that he manage to get on the ranking at all with a technique for the lower ranks that doesn't even have the follow up yet shows how much the technique is valued read it properly
Enlightened_Clown:lmao that's not even that of massive problem The thing you should cry about is that it's only ranked 93. And not even based on the whole alliance but only on one planet. Then his peak power doesn't even qualify for 2nd rank evolver.
