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Chiemezuo_8904
Chiemezuo_8904Lv32mth
2024-11-10 11:01

I first of all want to say that the initial idea for his golden finger was really good and really out of the box when compared to what other MC's are given though the issues I have with are an inconsistency in the fact that in his first world travel he was able to instantly improve the techniques he saw with no prior background in martial arts with no reason being given as to why but the had to comprehend everything else on his own, and while that isn't much my main issue with the story is that the protagonist does not seam like a real person, the only thing he knows how to do is cultivation, getting resources to cultivate and going to place to cultivate better I've literally read about robots with more of a personality than him, if living is about the diverse experiences we go through then the MC might as well be dead so even though I wouldn't go as far as calling trash I do believe that there is a lot to improve on

Comprehension Ability: Creating and teaching the Dao in various worlds

It's not Sunday
4.0
766 Chs

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Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

I agree story just lacking any kind of personality

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gtfrd_hujik
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the story is interesting and does follow many similar stories on reincarnation but takes a spin on it and makes it so the story seems to be able to reach further than those, and that is great because i love these types of stories!

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SoloQueen
SoloQueenLv15

Very good, but why so slow updates, there are at least double more in raws, c'mon gimme a mass release, it's too torturous reading only a few chapters per day. Anyway overall compared to timeless novels it falls short by 1.5 levels but in it's on right there's nothing wrong aside from gender swapping due to ai.

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Sam_Sur
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the author has made mc too op which makes the story somewhat stale .the framework of this novel has great potential but being too op makes it somewhat boring after all not all novel r like one punch man where even though mc is op that's what makes the novel great.

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Ultimate_Boss
Ultimate_BossLv12

It was good until the MC decided to upload the martial techniques he got from another world without any preparation. I mean wasn’t he worried about them finding out about the door? Yes he wants to avoid being conscripted but at least there should be an explanation as to why he uploaded it without hesitation or worry that it might backfire on him cause how is he supposed to explain its origin I just hope it doesn’t continue going downhill from there

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DaoistMWsvsL
DaoistMWsvsLLv12

The story is good, it was exciting to go to different universes, there are always new things, you don't get bored while reading it's like reading a new story all the time the only bad thing is that the story touches on something and then completely forgets about it as a reader you feel expectation and curiosity but your curiosity is not satisfied because it's as if nothing like this ever happened

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Ewan_Shin
Ewan_ShinLv15

Pretty ehh... translation quality is fine and world background is also fine but the characters and story itself are boring, frustrating, stupid and cliche in a bad way etc. There is a lot of oxymorons in the writing and the system hardly does what it was supposed to do so the mc could have a setback and be motivated...I guess? Not really horrible overall but this one's not for me.

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Renol_devin
Renol_devinLv13

Its a good novel. The concept is nothing new. I have read similar novel before. But it's really enjoyable. There is no romance. He is building a martial arts system by assimilating numerous paths.

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M_Loe
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I remember this novel as a fanfic but it got deleted it seems

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Transcend_SOA
Transcend_SOALv12

hmmm overall good but the power ranking is off and have some plot hole that need to be fixed and story development is kinda sus....

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