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1stDrunkenImmortal
1stDrunkenImmortalLv145mth
2024-05-30 03:29

Just not my cup of tea. He gets power ups To fast. How you going to be living in a world for 17 years and have a family and all and still treat it like a game. And the system just give him everything he need to get strong how does your Pokémon get 50 lvls while just trading and not fighting other pokemon.

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AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

He gets no powerups? Question mark? He trained for an entire year with those Pokemon? This is already slow, okay? In other stories they go through one region which is less than a year and train from level 10 to 70! Plus, have you never played the games? The lower the levels the easier it is to level up! The higher you get the harder it is like... Hello?

OtherShore_Asura
OtherShore_AsuraLv2

Well sorry fellas guess the paragraph spacing doesn't work...

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Desertstorm
DesertstormLv3

I read the first 10 chapters and 9 of them is pretty much system handouts to the point it doesn't feel like a fanfic, it's more like an update sheet. There's no real progression from the chapters I read like Meowth goes from an egg and to level 20 and it has like 10 moves...like really? Sorry not for me.

AgentMonke:He gets no powerups? Question mark? He trained for an entire year with those Pokemon? This is already slow, okay? In other stories they go through one region which is less than a year and train from level 10 to 70! Plus, have you never played the games? The lower the levels the easier it is to level up! The higher you get the harder it is like... Hello?
ReactionAddiction
ReactionAddictionLv4

if you don't know or already forgot about me, just mark me as a fan of your MHA, Multiverse, and Cultivation novel

AgentMonke:He gets no powerups? Question mark? He trained for an entire year with those Pokemon? This is already slow, okay? In other stories they go through one region which is less than a year and train from level 10 to 70! Plus, have you never played the games? The lower the levels the easier it is to level up! The higher you get the harder it is like... Hello?
MarkoEnigma
MarkoEnigmaLv4

author has giga c@ncer, when someone comments bad about the fanfic, anything rwally, he goes off and flames everybody

FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

Haki, galaxy impact and 6 powers, id consider a power up. Im 12 chaps in, when is bro going to stop babysitting and shoving gifts at everyone that happens to breathe in his general direction and go do pokemon trainer stuff? Like gym battles and conferences? He's more of a delibird than anything at this point.

AgentMonke:He gets no powerups? Question mark? He trained for an entire year with those Pokemon? This is already slow, okay? In other stories they go through one region which is less than a year and train from level 10 to 70! Plus, have you never played the games? The lower the levels the easier it is to level up! The higher you get the harder it is like... Hello?
AgentMonke
AgentMonkeAuthor

never. Just stop reading if you want to see him use all the Mystery Gifts for himself. It's just not gonna happen. Plus, he doesn't challenge gyms or conferences, sorry. Not like every other Pokemon Fic. Very different.

FinnsRevenge:Haki, galaxy impact and 6 powers, id consider a power up. Im 12 chaps in, when is bro going to stop babysitting and shoving gifts at everyone that happens to breathe in his general direction and go do pokemon trainer stuff? Like gym battles and conferences? He's more of a delibird than anything at this point.
FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

No gym or conference challenges? Yeah, I'll stop reading

AgentMonke:never. Just stop reading if you want to see him use all the Mystery Gifts for himself. It's just not gonna happen. Plus, he doesn't challenge gyms or conferences, sorry. Not like every other Pokemon Fic. Very different.
Nuh_Uhh
Nuh_UhhLv3

The haki shits a joke

AgentMonke:never. Just stop reading if you want to see him use all the Mystery Gifts for himself. It's just not gonna happen. Plus, he doesn't challenge gyms or conferences, sorry. Not like every other Pokemon Fic. Very different.
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EroSpatula
EroSpatulaLv4

I’ll place my ranking here and describe why it is so for my own opinion. But for those who don’t wanna read a long reasoning, tl;dr highly recommended but not without its own problems. Writing Quality: 4/5 The Author can be said pretty experienced in writing, though sometimes consistency is kinda weird? Like we never gotten stats of any Pokemon and it was pretty standard until we get a stat board of Genesect and it was really out of left field for me. Apart from that I really liked his Ash vs Gary chapters, I mentioned it why I liked it there already. Updating Stability: 5/5 Not much to say, except a crazy quick update, I would read the new chapter and 2-3 hours later there would sometimes be a new one. I’m a bit worried for burnout so just take your time for it. Story Development: 2/5 Yeah, it’s a bit weird. I have a lot to say about this so you can skip this if you don’t wanna read it. It’s kinda hard to stomach the first dozen chapters cause of how fast it is but it slows down so it gets better. The overall development is weird as well, essentially what I digested was, gets attacked by a evil team (was it Plasma? I forgot.), wakes up with system, meets Oak and Ash, trains Ash, gets fossil pokemon with his Noibat, somehow get to Oreburgh? Meets his waifu who gets infatuated with him in 2/5ths of a chapter, challenges cynthia, becomes a substitute gym leader, goes to ancient sinnoh? And then some more. I like the story, it’s just rushed in some spots that I would like some more development time, like his waifu (though it’s acceptable on how you developed it later on), there’s only 1 thing that I would really like. Some sort of flashback to his previous team, he had 3 Pokemon, a Noivern, a Sandaconda and another Pokemon that I don’t even remember, yes it’s so rarely mentioned that I can’t even remember what was his 3rd Pokemon back then. MC has a vendetta against some Team dude and wants to kill him, I don’t feel much about the antagonist because I haven’t made a bond or received any bad impression apart from ‘he killed the MCs previous Pokemon’. Heck I have stronger emotions against that inspector Joy and that new Team Rocket inspector, so I feel like some sort of bond needs to be made with his previous team for us to look forward to the MC smash the hell out of the antagonist, and flashbacks are there for that. Besides, the antagonist doesn’t really get mentioned, he showed up in the first chapter, gets mentioned by Sirius maybe around chapter 80s and now 110s he gets mentioned again so again, I don’t feel much about him. Character Design: 4/5 It’s Pokemon, not much to say apart from the One Piece thing is kinda out of place from some time. The main interest is kinda… don’t get me wrong, I loved her in the games and her design is my favourite, it’s just that the Author kinda does this thing? Where he hooks the MC and the FMC up kinda quick when they meet up? Take a look at his MHA story (My personal favourite from this author), they get hooked really quick and kinda unnaturally? Not as unnaturally as his Multiverse Cafe one with the Uchiha. Apart from romance, the other characters fit within their personalities that we know them from games/shows so not much complaints there. World Background: 5/5 It’s Pokemon, ‘nuff said.

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