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Mirko22
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2024-05-18 06:29

If anyone has any questions, feel free to ask, I will try to answer as best I can. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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lord_Gilgamesh
lord_GilgameshLv4

does the mc know about dxd......i havent read it till now. ..... .i want spoiler

Mirko22
Mirko22Author

He does not know

lord_Gilgamesh:does the mc know about dxd......i havent read it till now. ..... .i want spoiler
Gaming_with_speedy
Gaming_with_speedyLv4

is his personality going to change because I mean he been made fun by a girl he likes and and humiliate then the person who gave him hope killed him

Gaming_with_speedy
Gaming_with_speedyLv4

and one more question do he figures out that rias let him get killed just to revivie him becuause that suspicious he just got killed and then he now a slave

Bijou_Shneider
Bijou_ShneiderLv2

will he become a reincarnated devil? how will a fairy king become a slave?

Nix_Phoenix
Nix_PhoenixLv1

The reincarnation abilities of the Evil Pieces, however, are not absolute as they cannot reincarnate Gods or Buddhas into Devils even with a Mutation Piece. The recipients they're used on still retains features and abilities exclusive from their previous race.

Bijou_Shneider: will he become a reincarnated devil? how will a fairy king become a slave?
NoYuri
NoYuriLv1

Any yuri?

Mirko22
Mirko22Author

No

NoYuri:Any yuri?
The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Hello author I am enjoying the story so far however I’d like to know if MC would find out that rias pretty much orchestrated his death for her advantages. Also, will the mc stop being so naïve and trusting he’s been betrayed way too many times by literally everybody,the girl that he had a crush on, the fallen angel, as well as Rias who knowingly let him die. I have faith you know what your doing and will continue to read this novel.

Mirko22:No
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

Why would you make a fae character only to turn him intoa devil hes not a farry anymore defeats The basis of the story I mean seriously man This is like making the mc a esper only to make him into a devil rather than play on the esper system of power and perspective Basicly killing off the special side of the storys base The mc would have had the special system of power of geas Basicly the power of promises And personal restrictions Like the promise to always train on the weekends when not sick or injured To never give up To never eat chockolate willingly to swear off eating squid or something Basicly the more restrictions But nooo you choose devil False advertising you bait and switched us

Mirko22:He does not know
King_Cambren
King_CambrenLv15

Why did you add the mic the Rias’s periage?? And not leave him alone or make him a friend instead of a slave?? No hate just frustration, confusion and curious.

Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4

Lemons ?

Mirko22:He does not know
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Idk please dlete the overpowered tag and add dark and tragedy instead so that people don't read this with the hope of him being a "fairy" and "op" and Instead know that he is a slave of the devil's thank you.

Author_for_fun
Author_for_funLv4

this fic had so much potential, but you messed it up with the forced drama and tried to make Rias look bad when the only bad thing she did was knowingly let the Mc die so she could reincarnate him. He would've died anyway unless she stepped in to save him, which she doesn't need to do because he's a nobody. His whole speech about him being done being her slave was laughable because she's never treated him like a slave.

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