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Lucas_Coimbra
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2024-05-29 21:35

Basically, the protagonist appears about to go to Hogwarts for his 4th year, as an exchange student from the US, he has no money, belongings, or memory of anything he should "know" about magic, "his" wand appears to be completely dead to him, just like other wands, he can do magic without it, but doesn't seem to have much energy to do it for long, he also doesn't seem like the type of person who thinks a lot, a bit impulsive, joined the trio of gold almost instantly, and seems to stick around whenever it gets the chance. Other than that, the characters are all very well done, with good grammar and each chapter should last about 5 minutes, maybe longer. For those who are interested in fanfics of this type where the protagonist interacts with the golden trio frequently and wants to join their group, this could be a good story.

HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic

Kitamari
3.2
141 Chs

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Lucas_Coimbra
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why anyone would steal this story, I don't know, but ok.

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Overall, this novel has great grammar, fluid caracter interactions, and a solid plot. As you'll learn in the 1st chapter, the mc starts in Harry's 4th year with no recollection of his life as a wizard. Why and how he was transported remains obscure, and is something that I hope is addressed further in the novel. Similarly, the way the mc uses magic is abnormal for the HP world. (minor spoiler ahead) He uses a form of wandless magic that seems to allow him complete freedom of how to use it (no fancy wand waving, no speaking). Additionally, he starts with light Occulemcy. He joins up with the Golden Trio and gets sorted into Gryffindor, but is more Ravenclaw oriented (Hat said it not me). He seems good natured, not particularly greedy or lustful, and is shown to pay back favors. The love interest seems to be Hermione, but could be Luna. I should also mention that the mc is hesitant to flirt with Hermione cuz he thinks he would be NTRing Ron. Speaking of Ron, this is not for Ron haters. The author does of great job of redeeming Ron, and making him an enjoyable character. Read as of Chapter 20, so Story Development and World Background are only graded as of right now. P.S.: my grading is 5 5 4 4 5

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_DEKIM_
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The beginning was great but chapter 2 was as if the author threw the novel in the trash.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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There are so many great stories you could have lifted from talented authors, but you took one of mine? Haha! I suppose I should be flattered, but there are much better choices out there if you're trying to swindle unsuspecting readers to subscribing to your Patreon. For anybody else, I named it A Curse of Truth on fanfiction dot net...might be easier to read there. If any of you speak Russian, there was a guy who asked me if he could translate it, and he fixed a couple errors that I'm pretty sure I didn't go back and fix, so that version might even be a little better if you can find it haha.

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LastGod
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i dont know what the MC looks like. I hate MC name. How in the hell will MC make up 4 YEARS of classes in one year. This is just a weak inconsequential MC that does nothing to make the story better for harry and the trio. It looks like hes only there to suffer.

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I have just read the first two chapters at the time of this review. It has made me laugh and it is easy to stay engaged in the story. If this story keeps the same type of energy throughout the whole story I can see this becoming one of my favorites. Here's to a great start to a story and hopefully an awesome journey.

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