Item: HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic
Rating: 1
Author: _DEKIM_

_DEKIM_Lv18mth

2024-05-25 09:34

The beginning was great but chapter 2 was as if the author threw the novel in the trash.💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic

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