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Mu_Shin
Mu_ShinLv18mth
2024-05-19 07:23

Overall, this novel has great grammar, fluid caracter interactions, and a solid plot. As you'll learn in the 1st chapter, the mc starts in Harry's 4th year with no recollection of his life as a wizard. Why and how he was transported remains obscure, and is something that I hope is addressed further in the novel. Similarly, the way the mc uses magic is abnormal for the HP world. (minor spoiler ahead) He uses a form of wandless magic that seems to allow him complete freedom of how to use it (no fancy wand waving, no speaking). Additionally, he starts with light Occulemcy. He joins up with the Golden Trio and gets sorted into Gryffindor, but is more Ravenclaw oriented (Hat said it not me). He seems good natured, not particularly greedy or lustful, and is shown to pay back favors. The love interest seems to be Hermione, but could be Luna. I should also mention that the mc is hesitant to flirt with Hermione cuz he thinks he would be NTRing Ron. Speaking of Ron, this is not for Ron haters. The author does of great job of redeeming Ron, and making him an enjoyable character. Read as of Chapter 20, so Story Development and World Background are only graded as of right now. P.S.: my grading is 5 5 4 4 5

HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic

Kitamari
3.2
150 Chs

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Mu_Shin
Mu_ShinLv1

Uuuuuh... I dropped this. Essentially, a tad after chap20, the mc just shows that he knows everything (he doesn't say he reincarnated). He reveals all his secrets, from Year 1 to Year 4, and that's a major turn off for me. If you like this kinda stuff, great, keep reading, but otherwise... well... yeah...

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Psan
PsanLv5

This is the ff where the MC dies at the end and Hermione loves him but gets with Harry and there's a weird love triangle that only has Harry x Hermione and Bud isn't a part of it physically but emotionally.

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Cain_Cameron
Cain_CameronLv11

The whole thing with Beta Bud getting close to Hermione then shipping her with harry, then getting close to Luna then shipping her to Nevil then a weird 3 way thing with Harry Hermione and Bud and now Raven haired Daphnie is introduced (meaning this is an AU between movies and books), Its a bit confusing as to what the author is trying to do with regards to romance, Honestly the generic HP harem fanfictions make more sense then what ever is going on here.

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No_1_islookin
No_1_islookinLv4

thanks everyone I'm out of here, this sounds horrible

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