Bakplayer

Unfortunately, a lot of people accept anything that comes from GTA; some even commented on how cheap the game is and said they would buy it even if it cost twice as much. It’s ridiculous fanaticism.

It would have already attacked when the first 12-year-old girl appeared.

The protagonist's laziness and inaction are making everything worse; it's very different from when the story began. Honestly, the plot is becoming forced. Seriously, author, there's nothing wrong with a story ending in 70, 80, or 90 chapters; in fact, that's a very good thing, but unfortunately extremely rare. 97% of fanfics are simply abandoned, so there's no need to force the plot to make the story last longer. This only diminishes its overall quality. No offense intended, just honest criticism. Compared to the beginning of the story, when I read several chapters with excitement, now I can barely read a single chapter sometimes; the enthusiasm from before is gone.

Maybe next time he'll really think about it, and I don't know, maybe he'll wait to be in a more isolated/safe place.

I'm not referring to the fake vampire, I agree with you on that. If we had to place the blame on someone, it would be on that boy that the MC and Aqua saved, for his incredible stupidity in knowing about the demon's race, but waiting until he became more powerful to explain why he became more powerful. I don't even have words for that useless idiot.

This is terrifying, Aqua's stupidity seems to be extremely contagious. I know the protagonist has never been a smart person, I've thought that ever since he chose the sword, but damn, it's like Aqua's "curse" is passing to him, one step at a time.

A major flaw in most Chinese novels, especially those related to cultivation, is the lack of genuine male friendship. Authors often surround their protagonists with women, enemies, or powerful masters, and when there is a "friend," the impression the reader gets is that the protagonist always sees them as an inferior being, unless it's the classic "friend who is the ice princess's brother." I know your writing style is similar to Chinese novels, but I hope you can create a genuine male friendship.

It's even better.

It's not like the ATG novel, where the names are, for the most part, quite intuitive.

I have to ask, but author, could you create a side chapter with general information, such as the cultivation realms, technique levels, and so on? No matter how much I read, I simply can't remember the names of the realms hahaha