Lucas_Coimbra

Well, I wouldn't go that far, but yeah, I'm getting tired of this drama.

Nice song

This is the first time I've seen a fanfic of this type translated to the end, take my 3 stones of the day man, you more than deserved it.

And please, if anyone reading this wants to leave their own review, be polite and respectful, but also honest. Both types, one where they insult everyone for no reason, being completely biased and sometimes even illogical, while the other usually puts only one or two words and dozens of emojis, are very boring to read.

Okay, I'll try to be as honest and clear as possible for potential readers after reading 48 chapters. So, frequent updates, but the way the chapters are written is like abridged versions, with very little dialogue, like events after events with a sentence or two in between, like: "No promises" Jake smiled. And it continues with more events. There is rarely any real dialogue, other than 2-4 sentences exchanged and that's it. It can be interesting at first but slowly wears the reader down, perhaps due to another fact, which was by far the most disappointing: There is barely any content from the series, Two and a Half Men. There was a minimum of interactions, much of it copied from episodes and that's it. There was more "life" in characters from other series than in the "main" one. No character has charisma, since there is almost no interaction, that is, almost no true individuality, anyway, I recommend reading the first 5-10 chapters so that you can get a sense of the style of this fanfic and draw your own conclusions.

I'll be honest, at this point I'm tired of these "heroes" still plotting against Viltrum, all in the name of "freedom", they'd rather let thousands of people die every year, with millions suffering from hunger, disease and disability, as long as it means no one from the outside interferes, and from what I've understood so far, nothing has really changed regarding people's freedom, I mean, people still work, eat out, read whatever books they want and play whatever games they want, so what freedom has been taken away? All this baseless anger is completely irrational to me. It makes no sense for them to be like this.

MC:

Bro

Fillers... Why?

Isso foi dramático