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DaoistywHEoI
DaoistywHEoILv46mth
2024-09-23 21:07

utter trash . . _______________

Naruto: Eye System(Rewrite)

SKM_Sensei
3.5
115 Chs

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Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv14

explain

6mth
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FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

elaborate

5mth
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JackYoda
JackYodaLv3

He doesn't know what he's talking about

Daoist4MxvaV:explain
5mth
2
JackYoda
JackYodaLv3

He doesn't know what he's talking about

FinnsRevenge:elaborate
5mth
1
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

DaoistywHEol is a toxic reader.Look at his chats he had for other stories.He had sent toxic messages to them as well.

Daoist4MxvaV:explain
4mth
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

DaoistywHEol is a toxic reader.Look at his chats he had for other stories.He had sent toxic messages to them as well.

Daoist4MxvaV:explain
4mth
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

DaoistywHEol is a toxic reader.Look at his chats he had for other stories.He had sent toxic messages to them as well.

FinnsRevenge:elaborate
4mth
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

DaoistywHEol is a toxic reader.Look at his chats he had for other stories.He had sent toxic messages to them as well.

JackYoda:He doesn't know what he's talking about
4mth
1
Other Reviews
Vegeta_light
Vegeta_lightLv13

Unfortunately the mc is more childish in this version instead of how you would expect a grown man in a kids body to react like the original. It always disappoint me as a man when I read another grown man being shy. I honestly don’t understand how any reader who’s been threw life can accept this unless your a weird, reclusive shut in. It’s almost the same thing in each Naruto fan fic, where the mc meets someone for the first time and all of a sudden feels the needs to protect them, it’s infuriating. When in reality or at least in my reality I would give that person advice about not taking not shit and keep it moving

5mth

TheUrbanKing
TheUrbanKingLv13

its a good idea but the writing quality is terrible. big chapters, too much filler and descriptive words. I can go on and on.

4mth
kibaelnoob
kibaelnoobLv1

Well, in my opinion, this is a very good story to pass the time. It's not a masterpiece, but if you're looking for a sort of slice-of-life story with a touch of action here and there, this is perfect for that. The author usually updates the story pretty quickly, which I respect. Without giving too many spoilers, it’s a typical reincarnation story, but wait, that doesn’t mean it’s bad. Again, it’s a decent story, perfect for passing the time and having fun reading it. I recommend it if you’re looking for something light to read.

6mth
JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

Dude, I'm going to be very honest, the MC is extremely weak and was said to be compared to Itachi... he's almost graduating, having the strength of a Genin without his Eye, and possibly a Chunin with the abilities of his eye.

4mth
Bertinho_Gamer
Bertinho_GamerLv1

it is okay. not good, but also not utterly bad. the chapters could be better editted, as they seem like a bunch of words glued together since the author does not use paragraphs constantly. childish mc. unrealistic progression. dumb decisions. this had potential, unfortunately, though, author does not know how to create a good original character, who supposedly has an inteliggence 20 times higher than an ordinary person, and still is completely and astonighingly dumb

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Jordi_Hardiansyah
Jordi_HardiansyahLv1

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ErickHenrique_BR
ErickHenrique_BRLv5

e ruim

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Medic14
Medic14Lv3

Please review my novel Journey of an Ordinary Ninja (Naruto Fan Fic.

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Net_Netuch
Net_NetuchLv1

I really liked this piece to keep it that way. Otherwise, there is nothing so good to read lately.[img=recommend] But what if I don't want to write a 140-character review? Maybe I want to write to the author : Keep it up, I really like your fan fiction. And how are these trunks counted? Are spaces taken into account? And if my reasoning does not relate to fanfiction, does it violate any rules and will my comment be fired?

4mth
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