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JapaOuO
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2024-11-29 20:10

Dude, I'm going to be very honest, the MC is extremely weak and was said to be compared to Itachi... he's almost graduating, having the strength of a Genin without his Eye, and possibly a Chunin with the abilities of his eye.

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SKM_Sensei
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i know but i am trying to show how he steadily grows.And tell me it won't get boring if the MC was strong from the beginning. read till the end of wave mission and tell me if you still like it.I am trying my best. thank you for your reply. 😊 🙏

JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

Man, constant growth would be if he evolved in an increasing way and not suddenly in the Chunin Exam or Shippuden he became Kage tier! I've seen many stories where they always put the MC at the maximum Chunin level at the beginning of the anime and until the Chunin Exam he becomes an Elite Jonin, like in 6 months he increased his strength several times doing missions that many times shouldn't even really give him this boom in power! In my opinion, constant growth is him continuing to evolve at the same pace.

SKM_Sensei:i know but i am trying to show how he steadily grows.And tell me it won't get boring if the MC was strong from the beginning. read till the end of wave mission and tell me if you still like it.I am trying my best. thank you for your reply. 😊 🙏
JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

And man, another thing that left me pretty mediocre with this story is the fact that MC doesn't really think like an adult. He has the mentality of an adult but acts childishly many times, and also because he doesn't evolve his power much, I feel like MC really isn't taking his training seriously! We've seen ninjas his age who would beat him up more than a little! Kakashi, who was considered a Jonin at 12 years old, Shisui, who if I'm not mistaken unlocked the Mangekyou Sharingan at 8 years old and consequently his strength should have been at least Jonin at that age, or even Itachi, who at 13 years old was considered a Kage tier ninja because of his Mangekyou Sharingan! That's where the MC comes from, who has the mentality of an adult, has attribute bonuses from system missions, and can't even get 1/4 of what the others could get?

SKM_Sensei:i know but i am trying to show how he steadily grows.And tell me it won't get boring if the MC was strong from the beginning. read till the end of wave mission and tell me if you still like it.I am trying my best. thank you for your reply. 😊 🙏
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

I am not gonna make him elite Jounin like that.The pace of the story is slow and his strength will only slowly increase.I had shown in one of the previous chapter of the stats needed for peak ninja levels of genin,chunin,Jounin,kage,super kage, otsusuki god.Pls look at the stats and you will see that it is impossible for me to make his a Jounin like that.Let me give you a spoiler.He will get Jounin (low i think) strength likely after naruko started her training arc for 5 months.

JapaOuO:Man, constant growth would be if he evolved in an increasing way and not suddenly in the Chunin Exam or Shippuden he became Kage tier! I've seen many stories where they always put the MC at the maximum Chunin level at the beginning of the anime and until the Chunin Exam he becomes an Elite Jonin, like in 6 months he increased his strength several times doing missions that many times shouldn't even really give him this boom in power! In my opinion, constant growth is him continuing to evolve at the same pace.
JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

Dude, then he'll be practically useless when the story begins, because the original Sasuke at the end of the chunin exam already had the strength of an Elite Chunin, and with the level 2 curse mark he could even possibly face an Elite Jonin, and after the 2 years he rose to the Kage level! The original Naruto with the One-Tailed Kyuubi Mode already gave him enough strength to be Special Jonin level! So the MC being only Jonin would be embarrassed

SKM_Sensei:i know but i am trying to show how he steadily grows.And tell me it won't get boring if the MC was strong from the beginning. read till the end of wave mission and tell me if you still like it.I am trying my best. thank you for your reply. 😊 🙏
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

you don't understand. him being Jounin level strength without using Kamigan.It will be like him having Kakashi strength without using his cheat.Then imagine him using his strength with Kamigan,bam, kage level.

JapaOuO:Dude, then he'll be practically useless when the story begins, because the original Sasuke at the end of the chunin exam already had the strength of an Elite Chunin, and with the level 2 curse mark he could even possibly face an Elite Jonin, and after the 2 years he rose to the Kage level! The original Naruto with the One-Tailed Kyuubi Mode already gave him enough strength to be Special Jonin level! So the MC being only Jonin would be embarrassed
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

MC without Kamigan will have Low Jounin strength after naruko goes for training arc.Mc during shippuden will have peak Jounin strength without Kamigan.Pls read the full fanfic and then you will understand what I am doing.

JapaOuO:Dude, then he'll be practically useless when the story begins, because the original Sasuke at the end of the chunin exam already had the strength of an Elite Chunin, and with the level 2 curse mark he could even possibly face an Elite Jonin, and after the 2 years he rose to the Kage level! The original Naruto with the One-Tailed Kyuubi Mode already gave him enough strength to be Special Jonin level! So the MC being only Jonin would be embarrassed
St0ry1ess
St0ry1essLv3

Soo,you,re meant to tell us that without his eyes,he's practically useless?

SKM_Sensei:you don't understand. him being Jounin level strength without using Kamigan.It will be like him having Kakashi strength without using his cheat.Then imagine him using his strength with Kamigan,bam, kage level.
SKM_Sensei
SKM_SenseiAuthor

no what I am saying is that the Kamigan enhances the users strength by 2 levels. example if he has kage level strength without Kamigan, his strength will go to six paths level with Kamigan. and if his strength without Kamigan is six path level, then his strength with Kamigan will go otsutsuki god level.

St0ry1ess:Soo,you,re meant to tell us that without his eyes,he's practically useless?
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