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Henzy_5477
Henzy_5477Lv18mth
2024-05-14 22:56

Ooh, this is quite an interesting fic I found! It's actually pretty good so far, and although I'm more of a fan of MCs that make the fullest out of their gifts and powers, this one isn't too bad. He's pretty laid back, but he does at least have a sense of responsibility and good morals, plus he's already beginning to be a pretty strong individual, though I do think he does need his own crew. So yeah, this fic is pretty good so far and it's shaping up to be an interesting fic. I do wanna ask if the author has any plans for the future of this fic though, since it's shown that the MC does have a goal and a plan for it, but it's honestly a bit vague.

OP: Of Wind and Waves

Sir_Stronghold
4.9
19 Chs

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Sir_Stronghold
Sir_StrongholdAuthor

thanks for the review. I am still working it out. the next update might be a bit because of that.

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Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv4

This has great potential. just make sure to watch the pacing, try not to skip around so much. So far I think we have had one small time skip, which was clearly indicated in the story. If you wanna do a bigger one next time make sure to clearly indicated how long the time skip is

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Sky_TheEnder132
Sky_TheEnder132Lv14

bruh, another gold novel. earlier, I didn't expect much looking at the not-so-much chapter. But, it caught me off guard at how good this novel is. A pity that the update stability is awful.

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Lukeskydrinker
LukeskydrinkerLv10

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MeisterParadox
MeisterParadoxLv4

Great idea for an OP fanfiction and well implemented. It's definitely worth reading. 8/10 ☆

8mth
Some_Thing_8779
Some_Thing_8779Lv4

Hoping for more chapters! Unique fanfic idea!

8mth
LoserOfLife
LoserOfLifeLv4

Great fic, good grammar, creative idea and great execution.

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Victor_7740
Victor_7740Lv14

Very good with lots of potential abcdefghi

9mth
Killer_Bee_44321
Killer_Bee_44321Lv4

More please 🙏

9mth
Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv4

5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

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