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Ooh, this is a pretty good chapter! So much has been accomplished here: getting acquainted with Zephyr who will be the future leader of the Neo-Marines, getting a connection with Vegapunk, and finally getting those nasty marks off the girls. I do wonder though, is the MC gonna eat a devil fruit or no? Cuz tbh if he does, then the copy of Kaido's fruit would be a really good choice, assuming it has already been synthesized.
She probably didn't do anything too bad. Like, she did debut by trying to get the credit over one of the villains John was fighting, but as far as we know she didn't do anything else. If she was as scummy as the ones listed in this chapter, then there's no way in hell this Homelander would even try to associate himself with her, not to mention become friends.
The fic is pretty good so far. The writing is solid, it has frequent updates, the characters are portrayed well and are true to the source material, and it's a One Piece fic so the setting is no issue. There hasn't been much progress with the plot, but there are only 12 chapters at the time I'm writing this so it's to be expected that the story hasn't gone that far yet. I'm excited for it to break canon though, since that's what the synopsis implied.
Ok, *now* we're finally at Sabaody! It's gonna be quite the exciting arc, mostly because we're gonna see some pigs get slaughtered. I really look forward to it! Ooh, it would also be nice if they get to recruit Bonney now while she's here instead of later on. I don't think there would be a better time and place for it, anyway. Thanks for the chapter!
It only has 5 chapters at the time of writing this review, but what's there is pretty interesting. You do need to push your suspension of disbelief quite hard in some parts, like how the Elders didn't kill the MC immediately after seeing that he has Conqueror's Haki (they think *Akainu* is too soft, ffs), but overall the story is shaping up to be quite a good one.
Do you really think Big Mom is a strategic thinker, what with her essentially being a child in a gigantic monster's body? Though yeah, Katakuri should have known to accompany Cracker here since they're dealing with a pirate who was able to get a bounty of 1 billion before they even got to the New World.
God that would be so awesome. Imagine if he had that fight during the Marineford arc. Their battle would be absolutely legendary, and best of all, it would be livestreamed to all the government-affiliated islands and some other islands, so Kaido would definitely get what he wanted, which is to die a glorious death. Of course, I kinda doubt that would happen since he's been saying it's supposed to be his sister who will kill him.
Yup, it went about as expected. Not gonna disparage any of them though (except Judge just on principle) because Luffy did hide a huge part of his strength from the public ever since he set sail, and Big Mom does have the strength to back her actions. Doesn't stop me from laughing at them though. Thanks for the chapter!
A little strange? The hell? You think sexual scenes involving extremely underage characters are only a "little strange"? Don't sugarcoat it, the beginning of the fic is horrible enough to deter most people from reading the rest. And I really couldn't care less about another generic OP SI-OC novel, especially not when it features a damn groomer as the protagonist.