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Jonathan_Lam_2034
Jonathan_Lam_2034Lv411mth
2024-04-27 13:17

This has great potential. just make sure to watch the pacing, try not to skip around so much. So far I think we have had one small time skip, which was clearly indicated in the story. If you wanna do a bigger one next time make sure to clearly indicated how long the time skip is

OP: Of Wind and Waves

Sir_Stronghold
4.9
19 Chs

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Sir_Stronghold
Sir_StrongholdAuthor

Yeah I agree. I was worried about whether I was moving too quick as well. Thanks for the review.

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THEBADger
THEBADgerLv4

will this be a harem? if not, who will be the love interest?

Sir_Stronghold:Yeah I agree. I was worried about whether I was moving too quick as well. Thanks for the review.
11mth
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Sir_Stronghold
Sir_StrongholdAuthor

harem. I forgot to add that tag. and most likely Shirahoshi.

THEBADger:will this be a harem? if not, who will be the love interest?
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