This has great potential. just make sure to watch the pacing, try not to skip around so much. So far I think we have had one small time skip, which was clearly indicated in the story. If you wanna do a bigger one next time make sure to clearly indicated how long the time skip is

bruh, another gold novel. earlier, I didn't expect much looking at the not-so-much chapter. But, it caught me off guard at how good this novel is. A pity that the update stability is awful.

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Great idea for an OP fanfiction and well implemented. It's definitely worth reading. 8/10 ☆

Hoping for more chapters! Unique fanfic idea!

Great fic, good grammar, creative idea and great execution.

Ooh, this is quite an interesting fic I found! It's actually pretty good so far, and although I'm more of a fan of MCs that make the fullest out of their gifts and powers, this one isn't too bad. He's pretty laid back, but he does at least have a sense of responsibility and good morals, plus he's already beginning to be a pretty strong individual, though I do think he does need his own crew. So yeah, this fic is pretty good so far and it's shaping up to be an interesting fic. I do wanna ask if the author has any plans for the future of this fic though, since it's shown that the MC does have a goal and a plan for it, but it's honestly a bit vague.

Very good with lots of potential abcdefghi

5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.