Forced drama, dumb mc, and not a dc story since it’s multiple fictional characters from other stories also in it like Goku…. Waste of time and should have not been listed as a dc story
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In my humble opinion, it would've been more exciting to read the MC not aiming for World Domination that early. Really, its just 10 chaps in, but still..."Father hurt me so I hurt others too before hurting my Father back soon." -MC
Not a fan of villian stories. not against villians but their origin stories are just forced and make no sense or about someone abused whos to weak not to lash out at the world for his circumstances, so I've given up on em, at least on this app. however, I like the author, probably one of the more passionate and committed writers on this app! I use to be a pat reon member. if you write any stories with a different MC let me ill definitely be first to read it! good luck! Should definitely give his stories a chance before moving on.
It started of ok but the more the story progressed the less I like the mc as he was just your typical egomaniac and arrogant villain which isn’t fun to read. Having to paragraphs about what just happened and reaffirming what the mc said about himself is true by having other characters confirm it got old real fast. Don’t get me started on the characters from anime and stuff come into this.
Author, have you ever thought about making a FanFic about a Saiyan in DC............................................................................................................................................
The main character is supposed to be a Mastermind, but constantly allows himself to be goaded Into traps for plot, this is ridiculous, so i'm dropping.
I love this fanfic. it's got quality writing ,and it has no grammar mistakes, or at the very least I haven't noticed any. It even has a MC that has its own (detailed) villain origin story written into the fanfic. If I had to pick out something I don't like about this fanfic it's that the author has added other comicbook universes and/or characters from said comicbook universes, as well as anime universes and there characters...now I don't crossovers, but I would expect the author to have created tags for all the different comicbook worlds/universes, and/or anime worlds/ universes; like for example the author currently has added a marvel comics character (black Widow), as well as a Dragonball/DBZ character (Son Goku), and both have their respective backstories ( I don't know if their back stories are exactly the same as their original universes backstories).But despite them being added to the fanfic; there are no tags to notify the readers.
The way the story is told was good. The story has a good progression and a good character interaction, wherein the characters are able to interact with other characters without the interaction feeling like 2 people talking as if they are the same person. Overall, the story is well put, but I just hoped I read the tags, I didn't realize that he was the villain, I thought there would be a character development wherein he would become good. anyway, that was totally my bad. Man, I should really start reading tags.
another dope start...I know its a commision but I hope you turn this to another Aden Strong.I love all your work..just asking though,will you feature young justice in a major way..cos i would love to see that..vamos.....
This is a great story! keep it up author
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